The Easter Eggs by Sally Cronin
Lily dusted off her hands. They had been covered in soil from planting the three little primulas that she and her mother had picked up at the nursery today. Her mother always let Lily pick the colours and this year the purple petals with their golden centres danced in the soft evening breeze. She picked up her small watering can and gently moistened around the base of the plants like her mum had shown her.
“There you go Daddy, I promise to look after them all summer, watering them every day and picking off the dead flowers to let others grow like mum showed me.”
It was Easter and tomorrow, Lily and her little brother Michael would race around the house looking for the small cream eggs that her mother had bought at the supermarket yesterday. Both of them were very excited and it was really the first year that her brother understood what the egg hunt was all about. Mum said that three each was more than enough especially as they were going to the dentist soon for a check-up.
However, the real prize was the two large chocolate eggs that were hidden in very special places. In her father’s wardrobe perhaps, or his study where he would read them a story before they went up to bed, or even the garden shed that her mum laughingly called his man cave.
The next day Lily and Michael got up early and began searching the house. It took them an hour to find the six small creamy eggs and by the time they had rushed into the kitchen to show off their finds, two of them had already been eaten. Their mother looked at the smeared evidence of their successful hunt around their mouths and took the remainder off them for later.
“You need to eat your breakfast and then you can find the other eggs, I am going to hide them now so no peeking”.
The children hurriedly ate their bowls of cereal and drank their juice eager to get on with the hunt. After about ten minutes their mother returned to the kitchen and clapped her hands.
“Okay, let’s see how quickly you can find the big prizes”.
Lily took their dishes to the sink and the two children ran off hand in hand heading for their father’s study to continue the search.
They found one egg after about five minutes. It was beneath the big oak desk in a waste basket hidden by some crumpled paper. There was a card attached to the egg with ‘Michael’ written in big letters and he clasped the colourful box in his small hands as they raced from one room to the other. Finally they gave up on the house and headed out to the garden shed. There hidden under a cloth in a large plant pot sat a beautiful egg nestled in its packaging with a note perched beside it.
“The flowers are beautiful Lily and your daddy’s favourite colours”
From the kitchen window their mother saw her nine year old daughter lead her brother up the path to the house. Michael was clasping his egg to his chest and beaming from ear to ear. Lily looked up as they entered the kitchen and smiled gently at her mother as a look of understanding passed between them.
That night Lily placed the egg on her bedside cabinet next to the photograph of her daddy in his army uniform surrounded by other men in his team. He was smiling and looked happy. It was the last picture taken of him two years ago and Lily stared at it for a long time before switching off her light.
Tomorrow the Easter egg would join the other one on the shelf in her wardrobe and would never be eaten.
©Sallycronin 2015
Thanks for dropping by and hope you have enjoyed my recycled short story – have a wonderful Easter. Sally
Sally, this a piece that just ‘got me.’ I could kind of see that Daddy wasn’t around but that was fine because you built to that moment where that wasn’t actually the punch line and that made it more powerful. Great work. Happy Easter to you.
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Thank you Shey… I was lucky my father always came back but he was gone for several Christmas’s and Easters. Special times for children.. May you have many eggs!! ♥
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I have one anyway!!
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Nothing recycled about this story. It reads fresh as a pansy (or primula): vibrant, sweet, nostalgic, and I had a feeling about the end, which produced non-recycled tears. Beautiful story, Sally. Happy Easter. xo
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Thank you Pamela.. Happy Easter to you too.. xxx
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A very Happy Easter to you and David Sally.
xxx Gigantic Hugs xxx
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Thank you David and to you too.. hugs xxx
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Beautiful, Sally. xx
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Reblogged this on Chris The Story Reading Ape's Blog.
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Thank you for sharing Chris.. hugs xx
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Welcome Sally – Hugs ❤️❤️❤️
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Damn, Sally. I wasn’t ready for that. I’m just writing some clues for my son’s egg hunt, but I’m going to stop for a minute I think. Nicely done!
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Thank you Steve.. and I am sure the egg hunt will be much appreciated..Happy Easter.
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Such a lovely story with the perfect ending. Sweet, sentimental, moving. Thanks and Happy Easter, Sally.
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Reblogged this on The Writers Desk.
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Beautiful Sally. Only you could make me cry this early in the day. Happy Easter. ☺☺☺
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Oh dear Patricia.. sorry I hope the rest of the holidays is more cheerful.. hugs and Happy Easter.. xx
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Lovely story, Sally. The end caught me by surprise, right in the gut.
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Thank you Jane.. Happy Easter.. hugs xx
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Happy Egg Day to you too 🙂
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Such a moving story. Sadly many children will have to celebrate Easter without a parent due to conflicts in the world. Well written. Have a wonderful Easter. xo
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Thank you Darlene and you too.. hugs ♥
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So sweet. Better than any chocolates or colored eggs for me. ❤
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Thank you Annette.. we were lucky to have our dads.. ♥
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Well – now I need a kleenex.
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Sorry but I have shares… they need a boost from time to time.. Happy Easter.. xx
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A very poignant story, Sally
Happy Easter xxx
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Oh my, Sally. Lump in my throat. Wonderful story!
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Wonderful story, Sally. Happy Easter.
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Thank you John.. you too.. hugsx
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Sally what a wonderful graceful story. You do it every time. You lead us in, so we sort of know what to expect but we are never ready for that double whammy that hits right in the heart. You are an incredibly gifted writer. It is a joy to read you.
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As you can tell I am up late.. had a great evening and just hydrating before bed. Sweet Lily so grown up for her age… so many children have to do that.. hugs xxx
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They do and I feel so lucky that I was blindly and blithely unaware of anything like that as a dumb selfish kid! Nite nite Sally PX
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Another beautiful and touching story Sal. You know how to grab the heart! Happy Easter my friend. xoxo 🙂
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Happy Easter too Debby and just off to boost your book reading .. it went out earlier and already well on its way.. hugs xx
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A thousand thank yous my friend. I’ve been by and will continue to do so throughout the next few days. And of course I’ll be reblogging it!!!! ❤ ❤
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Perfect.. hugs ♥♥
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❤ xx
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Happy Easter, Sally! 🙂 xo
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You too Bette. xx
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Poignant story. Thanks for sharing, Sally. Happy Easter.🐣
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Thank you Marsha.. Happy Easter..
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Same to you, Sally. 🌺🌺🌺
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Lovely story, Sally. Happy Easter!
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Thank you Felicity Happy Easter to you too..
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Lovely Easter story, Sally! So touching! Thanks for sharing! Happy Easter! 🤗❤️ Xx
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Thank you Janice.. Happy Easter to you both too.. hugs ♥
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Hello Sally. Beautiful story full of colorful imagery. Of course it moved me to tears. You have a Happy Easter Sunday❣️
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Thank you Vashti.. and I hope you have a wonderful day… Happy Easter. ♥
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I had a very nice Easter. I hope you did too. Thank you! ❤
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Oh so sad Sally, that ending! Excellent. Have a lovely Easter. Xxx
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A lovely story, Sally, with a beautiful ending. Happy Easter. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Thank you Suzanne and to you too.. ♥
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Such a sweet, moving story, Sally. The end is a tear-jerker. Happy Easter to you. Hugs ❤
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I somehow missed this one in all the Easter preparations. It is a wonderful story, Sally. I really love it!
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Thank you Robbie.. xxx
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Very touching history. Happy Easter, Sally!
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Thank you… xx
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Sally I had to wait a good three minutes to allow my eyes to clear. And the lump is still hard within my throat.. How many more Daddy’s must there be until we really get the Easter Message..
Brilliantly told Sally and I have to stop calling by our mutual friends and follow you.. Can not promise to catch each post but I will surely try.. 🙂
Have a peaceful rest to the week.. As we send out our Love and Peaceful vibes into the world.. xxx ❤
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Thank you Sue and yes, there are far too many children without their daddy’s for all kinds of reasons. Love to see you from time to time.. hugs ♥
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Thank you Sally… 🙂 this was a touching story my friend..
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Oh…I felt the poignancy building up…beautiful so and warmly tender, loving and sad…I couldn’t help but emit a tiny gasp at the end! Well done, Sally, a beautiful story for Easter.
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Pleased you enjoyed Annika.. a little solemn but so many children no longer have a father for one reason or another and it is time such as Easter and Christmas when that is felt even more… hugs xx
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I am still playing catch up, Sally, so I am only now reading your charmingly poignant Easter story. I hope you had a marvelous Easter, and thank you for sharing this particular Easter story to remind us all to be grateful for family and pray for Peace.
xx,
mgh
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Thank you Madelyn..and even as adults we miss family that are no longer there at times like Easter.. all still children at heart. hugs xxx
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So true – holidays are harder as we lose people who used to grace our tables, no matter how old the calendar says we are. Bittersweet memories for which I am VERY grateful.
xx,
mgh
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