Knock, Knock #flashfiction

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“Knock, knock.”

“Who’s there?”

“Let me in, or you’re dead.”

“What? What did you say?”

“Knock, knock.”

“Who’s there?”

“Let me in, or you’re dead.”

“Look, I’m not playing this game. You’re scaring me and my little sister. My parents will be home soon so you better go, otherwise, Papa will punch you on the nose.”

“Knock, knock.”

“I told you, you’re scaring me. I’m not playing this game anymore.”

“Let me in, or you’re dead.”

“No! I’m not letting you in. Go away…PLEASE!”

For the next sixty-six seconds, there was nothing but total silence until, out of curiosity and as the clock struck six, Angela opened the door and peered out into the garden. Whoever it had been was gone and all seemed normal. That was until Angela began closing the door and noticed that the door knocker was missing.

“Knock, knock” came a voice from behind Angela, as…

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11 thoughts on “Knock, Knock #flashfiction

      • Totally!
        Although it was half mean to post it in the middle of the night. I read it at about 3 am in my country, had to close the window once when I reached the spooky bit, gather some courage, then reopened to read the rest. Definitely nailed the brief! Thank you for writing this. 😊

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    • This was the first time I scheduled a post to be published during the middle of the night in the U.K and just before bedtime over in North and South America. Judging by the response, I’ve had over on my blog, it seems to have worked. “One of the creepiest pieces of flash fiction I’ve written” I’ve been told. That is music to my ears.
      Thank you for reading it and for commenting on it. I appreciate it very much.
      Have a great day.

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