Welcome to the second post from the archives of Annika Perry who shares an atmospheric visit to Whitby Abbey in North Yorkshire.
The purpose of this series is to encourage you to head over and follow Annika’s blog and check out her more recent posts.. I hope you will do so.
Gothic Enlightenment by Annika Perry
Self-consciously I traced my way around the grassy labyrinth. Glancing up I caught the eye of a fellow pilgrim and sheepishly we exchanged wry smiles as I wondered, “Does he think I look ridiculous? Do I?”. The answer was an emphatic no, as I took a deep breath and continued on my way.
Arriving earlier at Whitby Abbey the cement bunker where we bought our tickets had been gloomy and disappointing, however on walking around the corner and up we were transported in time as chanting Benedict monks beckoned us forward across the sunny plain. Clad in long sweeping brown or white habits, heads adorned with flat round hat, their presence brought alive the ethereal spirituality of centuries ago as with heavenly voice their hymns awed the visitors into silence.
Quietly a monk explained the concept of the Path to Paradise, a circular interloping path cut from the grass, a time for inner reflection and meditation. There was only one way round, leading to the centre and here upon the granite altar we were requested to place a blessed stone from his basket and with it make a wish or prayer.
Soon thoughts drift from myself to the abbey, looming ahead, bathed in sunlight, the gothic ruins vibrating with life. Time slows, my son runs on ahead, diligently following the path and I enter a new dimension of total serenity and I immersed myself in contemplation. Here views of the long harbour wall, tiny dots of people meandering along, their children scampering between the fallen pillars of the abbey, some clambering on them.
Stillness.
Shattered as a clear voice breaks through and a monk recites a story; there he is, sitting in the middle of the circle, surrounded by fellow pilgrims. Just then my son places his stone upon the granite rock and without a pause dashes away to find his friends.
The End
With only a week until our holiday in North Yorkshire I recalled this piece I wrote as my first assignment for a creative writing course. Gothic Enlightenment describes our fortuitous visit to Whitby Abbey during their Path to Paradise celebrations.
“A good part of the business of fiction is performed half-consciously, even sub-consciously. So I’ll do a little scene and then another little scene and try not to think of the extent of the task ahead.” Hilary Mantel
©Images Annika Perry. 2015
Thanks to Annika for sharing this post about the Path to Paradise which seems to have acheived its aim of bringing stillness into that moment in time.
About Annika Perry
Although writing has always been a lifetime passion for Annika, her route to full-time writing has been circuitous and she formerly worked within journalism and the timber trade before severe illness and motherhood gave her an opportunity to pursue her dream.
Annika’s First Prize win in the ‘Writing Magazine’ short story competition was the much needed impetus and confidence booster for her to complete the first novel, ‘Island Girl’, which is currently in the final editing stages. Annika is also working on the last edits of her first short story collection which she hopes to publish this year.
As well as writing, Annika is an avid reader (a world without books is unimaginable for her), a keen gardener, walker and she enjoys travel (in spite of her well-documented fear of flying!)
For the past two years blogging has become an important part of her life and she deeply values the friendships formed here on WP via the warm encouraging and uplifting comments. She lives in the South East of England with her husband and teenage son.
Connect to Annika
Blog https://annikaperry.com
Twitter https://twitter.com/AnnikaPerry68
I am now looking for archive posts for the festive season.. short stories fiction and non-fiction, food and recipes, humour, memorable Christmas’s etc. Please send one or two posts to sally.cronin@moyhill.com.. I will be resuming the regular archive series in the New Year. Thanks Sally.
So Enlightening. I really enjoyed this piece.
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It was wonderfully enlightening and the peace of this visit stayed with me for days. So glad you enjoyed this post, Micki! 😀❤️
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Thanks for dropping in Micki.. hugs xxxx
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A beautiful share Annika. 🙂 ❤
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Thank you so much, Debby! 😀 A pleasure to share.
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❤ 🙂
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Thanks Debby..hugs xx♥
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Wow – this is so joyful and pleasant post…greatly done!!
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Thank you so much, Mihran for your lovely comment…a pleasure to share this post again on Sally’s blog. 😀
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well deserved, I enjoy reading your post, you have a unique and creative method.
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Sorry, Mihran, I’m not on FB! Many thanks again for your kind words. 😀
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Serene post, Annika. You capture the deep spiritual peace of the place. It felt, as I read the post, that there was a layering of the past and present that fit together beautifully. Thanks Sally for sharing!
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Diana, that was exactly the surreal sensation I had at the time…a few minutes of stepping back in time whilst comfortably knowing I was safe and in the present too. Although quite busy with half term holiday makers there was a quiet stillness and reverence among the tourists. Maybe we often intermingle with the past but are just too hasty in our actions and lives to notice?
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The place is stunning visually too. I added it to my bucket list. 😀
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Diana, it’s also the place where Bram Stoker gained some of his inspiration for Dracula and the town is mentioned in the book! There is a whole Experience place all about Dracula but that was too scary for softie me! 😀😀 Whitby is one of our favourite holiday places…I do hope you get a chance to visit…I’ll meet you up there!
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It’s a deal!
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Thanks Diana.. it sounds very tranquil..hugs xx
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Thanks for sharing.. back and had a great time..
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Sally, it’s a joy to be back here on your blog with my second archive post. With warmest thanks, Annika xx
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Thanks Annika for such an interesting post.. Just back from our jaunt to Belfast… fantastic city.. hugs xx
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Sounds great, Sally – Belfast is a city that’s been transformed! I was there in the late 80s, lovely people but slightly scary place. A place for my to visit list! Did you go the Giants Causeway?
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We didn’t really have time this trip.. Also more a summer excursion we will take a trip along the Mourne coastal route.. But really enjoyed and was very impressed with the shopping centre.. xx
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Many thanks for the reblog! 😀😀
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Thanks for sharing..hugs xx
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I love this post. It reminds me of the first time I visited Whitby Abbey 40 years ago. I too found it a very enlightening place. It was also my first trip to England and I was so excited, maybe I was more like your son. There were no monks to greet us at that time, just so much history.
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Darlene, how wonderful that you have visited here and also experienced the magical atmosphere of the Abbey. I love your sense of excitement and the monks were an added bonus! Did you visit any of the other abbeys in the area such as Foutains Abbey or Bolton Abbey – all magical mystical and mysterious places. It’s almost as it’s living history…
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Yes, my hubby is from North Yorkshire and was eager to show me all the sites. Fountain’s Abbey was also incredible. The city of York is magical. We got married there. Here is a post on our recent visit. Enjoy your trip. xo https://darlenefoster.wordpress.com/2017/02/12/york-revisted/
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Ahh…one of my favourite cities and a lovely post…thank you for sharing and bringing back some happy memories.
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Thanks for sharing that Darlene… hugs xx
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Some of these places can be so atmospheric.. almost feel the centuries of ardent and emotional prayer.. xxx
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Enjoyed that, Annika; Whitby worked its magic on you too! 🙂
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Absolutely!! 😀 I used to come here as a child with the family so it meant a lot to come here with my son and husband all these years later. Still magical and one of our favourite holiday destinations in the UK (also a great opportunity to meet up with my friends in the North!)
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Thanks for this peaceful post. Like you, I LOVE the spirits of old places. It’s always so intriguing to encounter people who throw off the “real” world to live lives of contemplation.
Also love the quote: “A good part of the business of fiction is performed half-consciously, even sub-consciously. So I’ll do a little scene and then another little scene and try not to think of the extent of the task ahead.” Hilary Mantel
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Adrienne, these old abbeys all have a wonderful serene peaceful atmosphere – I always wander amongst them in quiet contemplation…One school trip was to a monastery situated on the remote edge of the moors in Yorkshire and beforehand we were rather underwhelmed with the prospective outing. Afterwards none of us wanted to leave…it was the most memorable school visit ever, the monks amazing, so generous with their time, so at peace with themselves, us, the world…I realised we had so much to learn. I digress…
So glad you liked the quote…it seems the only way to write! 😀
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What a breathtaking place… Hugs to you both, Sally and Annika. Have a thriving Thursday!
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Thank you so much, Teagan – I love the idea of a thriving Thursday and it is a very productive day so far. Likewise to you. 😀❤️
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Thanks Teagan.. hugs xx
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It’s quite a place Annika. When a few years ago now when we were on our annual Yorkshire trip xxxxx
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Shey, you know exactly what I’m writing about! 😀 So glad you’ve been here and in beautiful Yorkshire- do you have family there? We go up a couple of times a year but not always to the East Coast (alas!).
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No I don’t have family there. We first went down to a place called Easingwold in1983 and stayed in a Georgian vicarage there. We loved the area but then the folks running the b and b said they were selling up and it was going to be a private house again. As we found out about 15 years ago , that sale fell through and the vicarage kept running as a b and b. We have made up for a lot of lost time since. We love the whole area. So beautiful. These days when we go we tend to do a lot of walking. Some pub crawling too in York. But we went to Whitby one afternoon and the abbey was amazing.
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Vielen Dank! 😀
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Thanks Annika for this really enjoyable article. Whitby Abbey has been on my must see list for about a hundred years (or at least since reading Dracula as a kid). You lovely article reminded me it’s about time I got it off my must see and got it on my have seen. Thanks!
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My pleasure and so glad you enjoyed it…and reminded you to take a look see at Whitby! We walked past the Dracula ‘museum’ but were too scared to enter…although my friend and her son did go in…she’s a lot braver than me! 😀 There is so much here to see and visit…hope you get a chance to go soon.
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Thanks Paul.. xxx
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A beautiful post, Annika. Isn’t it amazing how time has no influence over the spirit of place? People of centuries ago experienced the serenity of Whitby Abbey and the blessing of the Path to Paradise, just as you did now. I’m always awestruck by the silver threads that weave together past, present, and future. Another wonderful experience shared with your son ~ and now, with us. Thank you ❤️
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Tina, I love your image of the silver thread weaving through time, connecting, holding together… often we forget the past and future so entrenched are we in the Now – visits to places like this Abbey is a welcome reminder of the past, a mystical feeling that stayed with us long after this walk.
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Reblogged this on Annika Perry's Writing Blog and commented:
Once again it’s a pleasure to take part in Sally Cronin’s ‘Posts from Your Archives’ and in this second of four instalments I revisit the mystical Whitby Abbey and join some monks on the Path to Paradise.
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Thanks again for a wonderful post Annika.. it clearly went down very well.. hugs x
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Thank you Sally for posting Annika’ beautiful tale from Whitby Abbey. You do beautiful work for your fellow bloggers.
Annika, thank you for refreshing this to me , very mystic, inspirational and beautiful post.
I will go there again, it was ages ago. Just have to make sure the monks are there.😊 . It is amazing how their calm brings stillness among the visitors.
miriam
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Miriam, thank you for your lovely comment. Sally is wonderfully supportive of all bloggers, writers, readers…I get exhausted just thinking about all the work and organisation involved!
I do hope you get a chance to go to Whitby Abbey during this ceremony…it was so emotive and deeply spiritual…which I don’t think many of us had expected. Memorable and inspirational…the feelings live with me years later! A joy to share once again here! Wishing you a lovely Sunday. 😀❤️
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This post is just as lovely as the first time I read it. Thank you for hosting Annika, Sally. Her pieces are always inspiring.
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Ah…thank you so much, Jill…lovely to know you remember it from 2015 – my very early days when I still had my blogging stabilisers on!😀
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Annika, you describe the serenity the place invoked at the time you were walking the labyrinth and the serenity you took away with you and were able to recall so wonderfully in this post.
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Bernadette, I wanted to convey the highly unusual emotional reaction…it did feel like a moment of transcendence in the midst of the every day and everyone…the oddest sensation and the peace of the walk stayed with me (us) for the rest of the holiday!
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Wonderful place to visit Annika, and I have been so many times, walking under the Whale bones and down the steps into town, And up ALL of those steps to the Abbey Church etc.. Thank you for bringing back fond memories 😀
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Sue, I know…that’s a lot of steps!! I remember moaning about them when I was little and on our first visit here when my son was young he started off with great excitement… so keen but then became exhausted and had to be carried a while. The Whale bones are incredible – such a defining structure in the town..thank you for your lovely comment and it’s lovely to share our memories of Whitby! 😀❤️
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It is.. And as we get that little bit older those steps, are not so exciting any more LOL.. But I love the Shambles and all those little trinket shops and the Whitby Jet. I have a small cross made of it, No the thanks go to you, for bringing back the memories 🙂 Enjoy your week .. Sue
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Lovely post, Annika. ❤ xo
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Thank you so much, Bette! Hugs xx
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Beautiful post, Annika! Whitby is such a lovely place.
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Thank you so much, Clare…it is indeed! 😀❤️
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Thank you, Annika for this journey back in time… jc
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My pleasure, JC…a joy to share this magical place and day! 😀
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What a nice idea, Sally. I really should give myself a shake and see if I can’t come up with something a tad creative. I love the quote you use. And I’m a fan of Annika’s writing. And I can picture that scene at Whitby Abbey- a place I’ve visited too. 🙂 🙂
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Many thanks for your very kind comment, Jo and so glad I managed to capture Whitby Abbey…Have you ever written a post about a walk there? I’d love to read it! Also I hope you find some archive posts to share for next round…Thanks for liking the quote as well; I do feel her words give me permission to write freely without stressing too much about planning…so often my stories have taken me in surprising and unexpected directions! Hugs xx
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I might have included the abbey in a walk, Annika. Not sure and I’m using my phone so not easy to check. It’s a bit strange being back home and in the blog world xx
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Thanks Jo.. and hope you can find something in your archives to share.. I am beginning a new series in mid-January for Archive posts 6 months or older. I will do a post nearer the time. I am looking for festive posts right now for December. best wishes Sally
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Lovely post and photos, Annika! Felt like I was there! Thank you sharing this trip. 😘🤗
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Thanks Janice..hugs xx
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Thank you, Janice and so glad you could enjoy this virtual visit! 😀❤️
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Thank you for sharing such a beautiful mystical and healing experience with us. It sounds like a very special place.
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Thanks Brigid.. xx
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Brigid, your two adjectives are just perfect – mystical and healing! The visit to the Abbey gave me a lot of inner peace and sense of healing as a close member of our family was at the time terminally ill…my emotions were confused and raging, the Path to Paradise and the visit to the Abbey brought unexpected balance and strength. Hugs xx
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Wonderful xx
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Annika has a way of putting me right there. Thanks for the tour!
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Thanks for dropping in Jacqui…x
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My pleasure, Jacqui and so happy to have you along…I’ll be glad to give you a tour in real life if you every get a chance to visit! 😀
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Wonderful share, Annika! Thanks. 🙂
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Thanks Jennifer..
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Thank you so much, Jennifer…so glad you enjoyed this post! 😀
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Wonderful description, Annika. I felt the stillness. Wish it could last . . .
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Thanks for commenting Lori.
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Lori, I was surprised how long that peace did stay with me…the memory of the visit also brings renewed sense of calm…for a while at least! 😀❤️
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