Delighted to share a poem by author Pamela S. Wight today from her archives. Especially for those of us who are unlikely to see snow anytime soon, this is a lovely poem of family and snow…
As Snow Falls by Pamela S. Wight
As the snow falls like glitter
soft and fast and serious
my family of four sit in front of the fire
warmed by the presence of each other.
Soft and fast and serious
our talk includes weather and food and walks
warmed by the presence of each other
the sight outside is miraculous.
Our talk includes weather and food and walks
and my now grown-up son winks at me
the sight outside is miraculous
so he suggests a brisk walk in the woods.
As I pull on heavy jeans and a warm coat
I feel the frosty air and fierce snow billow round
just mom and son braving the storm
walking into woods that quietly accept this gift.
I feel the frosty air and fierce snow billow round
as our talk swirls round us likewise
walking into woods that quietly accept this gift
of silence loud as snow hitting bare branch.
As our talk swirls round us likewise
my son shares his thoughts, hopes, and dreams
of silence loud as snow hitting bare branch
of love and fears and theology.
My son shares his thoughts, hopes, and dreams
as we crunch through tender white ground
of love and fears and theology
of a young man searching for answers to life.
As we crunch through the tender white ground
soft and fast and furious
a young man searching for answers to life
warmed by the presence of each other.
©Pamela S. Wight
About Pamela S. Wight
Pamela Wight is a successful author of romantic suspense and has recently added “Children’s picture book author” to her repertoire.
Her first book, THE RIGHT WRONG MAN, got rave reviews for taking readers “on an exciting adventure with lots of intrigue, unexpected plot twists, and romance.” A year later, Wight published her second novel, TWIN DESIRES. “Lots of suspense, plot twists, romance, and excellent character development makes this a fun read!”
Early reviews for the gorgeously illustrated, BIRDS OF PARADISE (pub date April 15, 2017) include enthusiastic comments: “This creative, compassionate story about birds will inspire children to notice the everyday adventures of backyard birds.”
Pamela earned her Master’s in English from Drew University, continued with postgraduate work at UC Berkeley in publishing, and teaches creative writing classes in Boston and San Francisco.
She lives in the Boston area with her “right man” and hikes the New England trails while concocting her next novel. Wight travels frequently to the San Francisco Bay area for additional inspiration. She speaks to book clubs in both locations.
One of Pamela’s books would make a perfect gift for any child in your family.
Sweet sparrows Bessie and Bert grow up as differently as night and day. Bessie is fearful of the dangers inherent in being a bird. She’s scared to leave her cozy branch. But Bert relishes flying in the sky and pecking delicious seeds on the ground, until he loses half a tail. Bessie and Bert uncover each other’s fears and, through a newfound friendship, re-discover the delight in being birds. Charming, lustrous illustrations and light, lilting verse delight children and adults alike as they gain a new appreciation for the joyous birds in their own backyard.
One of the excellent reviews for the book
I bought this book for my friend’s son who just turned 4 and told her I wasn’t sure if it would be over his head. This was her response: “He was very attentive all the way through and said he was old enough for this book. He enjoyed looking for the ladybug on each page and we compared the ending theme of enjoying the world to another book of his about a dumpling and a cockroach. When he is older he can get the deeper layers of the messages in the book.”
Then I sent it to my other friend’s daughter who just finished kindergarten. She said her daughter loved it:)
Read the reviews and buy the book available US only: https://www.amazon.com/Birds-Paradise-Pamela-S-Wight/dp/0998460613
Also by Pamela S.Wight
Read the reviews and buy all the books: https://www.amazon.com/Pamela-S.-Wight/e/B00AYXT6R
And Amazon UK: https://www.amazon.co.uk/Pamela-S.-Wight/e/B00AYXT6R6
Read more reviews and follow Pamela on Goodreads: https://www.goodreads.com/author/show/7042822.Pamela_S_Wight
Connect to Pamela
Website: https://roughwighting.net/
Facebook: http://facebook.com/roughwighting
Twitter: https://twitter.com/pamelawight
LinkedIn: http://www.linkedin.com/in/pamelawight
Thanks to Pamela for sharing this poem today and I hope you will head over and check out her books too. Thanks Sally
Beautifully captured, Pamela.
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Thank you Sue..hugs xx
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Thank you so much, Sue. More snow expected here in the Boston area tomorrow!
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We could do with some here too 🙂
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❄️ ❄️❄️❄️
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That was beautiful!
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Thank you Jacquie.. hugs xx
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What a wonderful compliment, Jacquie. Many thanks. xo
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This poem has such a beautifully thought structure to it.
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Thanks Paul..hugsx
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A pantoum poem gives me the structure that helps me write from the heart, Paul. Many many thanks. ❤
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Wow Pamela, I did not even know that was a classic poem structure. Doubly impressed… Hang on you have also taught me something… tripley impressed! The effect is fantastic- the way an earlier line becomes the starting point to take the old thought to an entirely new place. It reminded me a bit of what Handel did in his arias: he echoed a phrase taking it on to an entirely new place. And then when you recaptured all the old lines in the last stanza to produce both a summary and a poem in itself…. well it was remarkable. I take my hat off to you! Not only a beautiful poem but an accomplished one also!
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I’m blushing! I find the patterns in this kind of poem challenging, but in a wonderful way. And you’ve just made my day! 🤗
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Pamela you should be blushing… not at the nice comment… but at your own talent! Have a lovely Christmas PX
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This is so lovely, Pam.
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Hugs to you, Mary! Thank you.
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A huge snowpile of thanks to you, Sally, for sharing my Christmas-time poem. I’ll be sharing your share on my blog Friday morning. Wishing you (imaginary?) delicate beautiful snowflakes during this holiday season.
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Thanks for sharing your lovely poem, Pamela. ❤ Wishing you and yours A Very Merry Christmas! xo
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And to you, Bette. It’s such a pleasure, reading your blog. xo
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Thank you, Pamela. I’m so grateful we’ve become blogging friends. ❤ xo
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Me too!!! oxox
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I could hear that cosy conversation between a mother and son despite the snow, Pamela. Thanks for sharing and warming our hearts too. Merry Christmas dear friend.
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I’m so glad you felt that distinction between the frosty snow and the warmth of the mother-son conversation. I admire your poetry, and thank you so much for the comment.
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Beautiful poem Pam. Love how you brought the warmth of the season in with the cold snow ❤ 🙂
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Thanks Debby ♥
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Yes! I hate to be cold, but if I’m on a long walk with my adult son, suddenly the cold has no effect, and I can walk for hours. Go figure. 🙂
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The magic of a warmed heart! 🙂 ❤
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Reblogged this on Die Erste Eslarner Zeitung – Aus und über Eslarn, sowie die bayerisch-tschechische Region!.
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Thank you Michael..
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Always with a great pleasure. Thx for posting nice stuff. Michael 😉
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THANK you for sharing my snowy walk!
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As I read this, I felt the breadth of mutual love . . . silent as each flake of snow, fierce as gusts of winter air, deep as woods that welcome all. Beautiful juxtaposition, Pam. Thanks so much for sharing your lovely work with us ❤
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Wow, you just gave me (happy) chills, Tina. Yes, you describe it beautifully: mutual, fierce, deep mother/son love. I’m so glad you felt this from my poem. Big hug!
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Pamela that was lovely!!
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Thanks so much for reading my snowy poem, and enjoying. Stay warm!
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A walk with your son on a winter’s day – the best gift ever! 😀 Pam, you write beautifully, a lyrical narrative that enriches the reader…warms our soul. So happy for you, my friend and thank you for sharing with us. Precious times. Hugs xx
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Thank you Annika..hugs
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Thank you, Annika. I wish you similar precious times this holiday season (but perhaps without the snow…). 🙂 ❤
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Beautiful poem.xx
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Thank you Adele..hugs x
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Hugs to you too, Sally xxx
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I’m so glad you enjoyed my snowy walk. Thanks for joining along!
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my pleasure. 🙂
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What a wonderful poem, Pamela. I love this style.
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Thanks Robbie.. hugs xx
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Thanks, Robbie. The pantoum structure is really fun to work with when writing a poem. A bit like putting a jigsaw puzzle together, but with words. xo
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Thank you for sharing, Sally. Pam, this is a beautiful pantoum–so filled with love and tenderness–and snow. 🙂
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thank you Merril and Merry Christmas..
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Thank you, Sally, and Merry Christmas to you!
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YOU are the poet, Merril, so I’m thrilled that you like my pantoum. This is one poetic structure that I particularly feel comfortable with, for some reason. I’m so glad you could feel the love and tenderness. I wish you a warm cozy holiday. Love your Instagram photos. xo
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Wonderful imagery along with the moments of a mother with a grown son. Love the poem style (and that comes from a non-poet).
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Thank you for commenting..
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Thanks for having me … and for hosting Pam.
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I consider myself a ‘non-poet’ also, Frank. But the pantoum structure helped me express how I felt during this snowy walk. Thanks so much for your comment.
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Good that the structure helped you find a rhythm. I also struggle with fiction – out of almost 2,000 posts, fiction posts countable with one hand. … but I did draft a very short story the other night (about 300 words).
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Keep on going. Stories are just ‘fictionalized truth.’ How much fun is that?
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On one of my few attempts, I recall one powerful comment (well, at least to me) … Write what you know … which is what I did.
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A lovely poem, Pam! Warms my heart.
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thank you Darlene..hugs xx
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Enjoy the snow via my poem, Darlene. I know you’re reveling in your warm Spanish sun. 🙂
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It’s lovely, Pamela. Merry Christmas to you and yours, and you too, Sue!
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Thank you Carrie…
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I wonder if snow has fallen where you are, Carrie. If it does, make that college son of yours go for a walk (I love hearing about him via Twitter). Tee hee. Thank you for stopping by here and enjoying my snowy walk. It’s flurrying out as I type.
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A lovely gift to share, Pamela! Thank you.
Cheers to you both! 🙂
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Thanks Natalie… xxx
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Thanks so much for enjoying my ‘gift’ of a poem. Truly a gift for myself, but I think I’ll send this to my son. He hasn’t read it yet. Thanks for the inspiration. 🙂 Cheers, and Happy Holidays.
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What a lovely heartwarming poem Pam! Thank you so much and have a Merry Christmas. I wish I could bring you some cookies .
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I wish you could bring me some cookies too! Ha Ha. But I love the warm wishes (almost) just as much. Thanks for enjoying my poem, Gerlinde. I’m SURE you’ll miss the snow in beautiful Santa Cruz. (Um, not so much, probably). 🙂
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Such a breathtaking, quiet poem that bring so many memories to light. You have such a gift with words, Pam.
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Thank you for commenting Patricia..
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Wow, thank you for your generous praise, Patricia. Yes, I hoped that the quietness of the snow could be felt, in between the soft conversation of mom and son. Joyful Holiday to you.
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Your poem brought back the crackling warmth of a fireplace, and the soft cold powder of a fresh snow. You made me homesick for a New England winter. Merry Christmas, Pamela.
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Thank you for dropping in and commenting Paula. Merry Christmas..
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Sorry about the homesickness but glad for the reaction, Paula. 🙂 It’s snow flurrying out now, and we’re expected to get more snow on Christmas morning. I’ll think of you while warming my toes in front of the fireplace. Merry Christmas! ❤
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So beautiful, Pam. I don’t think I’ve seen that form before. It seems like it’s difficult, but you pull it off with such grace, you make it look easy. The story it tells is heartwarming. Perfect for this time of year. Thanks, Sally for sharing. Peace and joy to both of you. 🙂 ❤
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You sure know how to make a girl writer feel good, Diana. Thank you. Look up the pantoum poem structure sometime in your ‘spare time.’ I bet you’d have a blast with it. Merry, Merry Christmas. ❤
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Your most glittering phrase, Pam: “warmed by the presence of each other.” Nice to see you here on Sally’s website, a most generous blogger for sure. My best to you both in this joyous season and forward into 2018!
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Thank you Marian..xx
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Isn’t that the truth, Marian. To be warmed in each other’s light – each other’s presence – is better than sunlight. Blessings to you and Merry Christmas! xo
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Your poem of mother walking through the snow with son touched my heart. I liked the image of a young man searching for answers to life. We never stop searching, but the desire to find life’s answers is most intense when we’re young.
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Thank you for dropping and commenting.. Merry Christmas.
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And as a parent, we want to GIVE our growing-up children the answers. But no, they must find those themselves. So all we can do is …. go out on long walks in the snow and listen. (Or on a beach, or in the car, or…. ) 🙂
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Beautifully done Pamela.
Happy Holidays and Massive Hugs xxx
David
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Thank you David and Happy Christmas… ♥
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I wish you warm family time with your adorable grandkids, David, and peace and renewed strength and health in the New Year. xoxoxchristmashugxoxox
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Lovely poem, Pam. I spent Christmas day with my son and we had a major snow storm. There was no walk in the woods, but we had a great time huddled inside playing games, eating, and laughing. He’s got things figured out.
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Thanks Molly.. hugs ♥
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That sounds like a perfect way to celebrate Christmas together, Molly. We had a snowstorm too. No walks in the woods this time! ❄️😏
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Oh it was a lovely poem, indeed, from Pamela! Great share here, Sally. We had a bit of snow on Christmas Eve and it made for the first white Christmas Day in several years. Hugs
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That must have been wonderful Christy.. we have had the usual rain for a couple of days but a bonus of two sunny days.. very happy with that… Your post all set for 2nd January…Happy New Year.. hugs xx ♥
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It was lovely, yes. Oh I’m so excited for Jan 2, Sally! Thank you in advance, sweet you ❤
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Ohhh, thank you for enjoying my snowy walk, Christy, and for sharing it on Facebook! Glad you had a bit of white Christmas this year. We had a snowy 6 inches starting Christmas Eve. I don’t like cold or a lot of snow, unless it’s Christmas, or unless I’m writing a poem. 🙂
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I particularly liked the description “tender white ground”.
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