Another weekly challenge that I am enjoying very much is the Carrot Ranch Flash Fiction Challenge by Charli Mills
This week the prompt was ‘Sea Mist’.
January 31, 2019, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story about sea mist. How does it create an environment for a story? It can set the stage or take the stage. Go where the prompt leads.
Respond by February 5, 2019. Use the comment section below to share, read and be social. You may leave a link, pingback or story in the comments. If you want to be published in the weekly collection, please use the form. Rules & Guidelines.
Here is my response…
After tea and some shared biscuits, the little dog’s mistress sent him down to the quayside to wait for the return of his master. This late January day had been overcast and strangely still, with sea mist rolling in during the late afternoon. The boats were overdue, and wives anxiously peered out of their windows towards the shrouded harbour. The terrier’s ears pricked at a slight sound, nose lifting into the damp air. Whimpering he shot to his feet with quivering tail and one front paw lifted. A voice echoed in the fog “It’s okay Patch boy, I’m home”.
©Sally Cronin
I hope you will head over and participate in the challenge too: https://carrotranch.com/2019/02/01/january-31-flash-fiction-challenge
Ooh, I like this. A lot!
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Thank you Annette..hugsxx♥
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How lovely to be greeted by the dog! Better misty and calm than misty and rough, argh.
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Quite D… and there is nothing like a dog’s greeting.. hugsx
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I love a good dog story. Well done.
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Thank you Darlene… cannot go wrong with them as the hero… when is Dot’s book coming out…hugsxx
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People keep asking. I did put a rescue puppy in my next Amanda book.
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Short and oh so sweet, Sally! Love the image too!
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Thank you Terri..hugsxx
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Aw, I love this, Sally. What a beautiful, sweet story. 🙂
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Thank you Diana… I am still working on getting that elephant and mice out of a pickle… will get there….hugsxxx
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Ha ha ha. I love it that you’re taking up challenges, Sally. Your writing is beautiful. 🙂
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Thank you Diana…♥
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Even with 99 words you can melt hearts Sal ❤ xx
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Thanks Debby ♥
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Very nice, Sally so lovely to be met by a pet 🙂 xxx
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Always a great welcome.. xxx
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All’s well that…
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Quite… thank goodness.
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It’s probably me, but as I read it, I felt it was eerie. Has he come truly come back or has the dog picked up something nobody else can see? I enjoyed it, Sally, but it seems my interpretation is well off…
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it is what you believe it to be Olga.. I love it that you see something eerie in it.. hugsxx
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😉 I guess I’m seeing ghosts!
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Aww, what a nice flash. I’m a sucker for dogs and dog stories.
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Thank you susan… appreciate that..
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Awww, what a sweet tale, Sally! I love it!
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Thanks Jan… enjoyed writing it..hugs
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Delightful tale as all of your stories are, Sally. I love the addition of the dog in this story. ❤
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Well done, Sally. You can pull at the heart with only 99 words. 🙂
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Thank you Jennie.. my husband finds it hard to believe…hugsxxxx
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You’re welcome, Sally! 🙂
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What a lovely happy story, Sally. The complete antithesis of my dark thoughts.
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Always good to have some light and dark points of view Robbie..hugsx
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Brilliant, Sally! I could feel the silence, the tension, the concern for the fog in a fishing community. So well written.
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Thank you Charli and for all the hard work I know goes into the challenge.. xx
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It’s my weekly joy!
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What a wonderful story, Sally. I was fearful of a sad ending, but it turned out rather well. Lovely.
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Thank you Norah.. xxx
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