Some flash fiction in response to this week’s Carrot Ranch Flash Fiction Challenge by Charli Mills
February 7, 2019, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story that includes a sign. It can be a posted sign, a universal sign, a wonder. Go where the prompt leads.
Respond by February 12, 2019. Use the comment section below to share, read and be social. You may leave a link, pingback or story in the comments. If you want to be published in the weekly collection, please use the form: Rules & Guidelines.
The Recycling Centre.
Having followed the signs to the centre, she stood in line. It was almost time to relinquish the baggage she dragged behind her. It contained items representing her life, the good, bad and ugly. Admittedly there had been much love and laughter mixed with the heartache. However, the invitation to recycle unwanted items offered a new start.
Holding out the suitcase to the man she hesitated. ‘Can I remove some things?’
‘Sorry ’, he smiled kindly. ‘It’s all or nothing.’
Loading the bag into the car, it seemed lighter than when she arrived, despite choosing to keep it all.
©Sally Cronin 2019
Thanks for reading and I hope you enjoyed….and will participate in the challenge yourself: https://carrotranch.com/2019/02/07/february-7-flash-fiction-challenge
This is an interesting idea, Sally.
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Thank you Robbie..hugsx
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I love that she chose to keep her memories, Sally. Well done!
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Thank you Jacquie..hugsx
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Now that is what I call flash fiction sally. An entire story in a 100 words or less. Excellent. Pxx
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Thank you Paul.. hugs xxx
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This is why I cannot be trusted to clean out a closet, dresser drawer, bookcase, etc. unless there is someone right there, able to cart it away before I can think twice. Well done, you!
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Thank you Annette..hugsxx♥
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Nice twist Sally! I am terrible at parting with things and had to be really strict during our recent house move! 🤪
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Me too Judy… still have an attic full..hugsx
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Yes, same here! Thank god for attrics! 🙂
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Excellent.
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Thanks John..hugsx
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Great story, Sally.
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Thank you Mary… xxx
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Lol, love it Sal. That would definitely be me! ❤
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Thanks Debby… except yours would be much better packed…..lol.. ♥
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Lol – debatable ❤ xx
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What a great story, Sally. I like how the relationship to the contents changed, and nothing else. 🙂
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Thank you Diana..hugsxx
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As Marie Kondo says, her memories must have “sparked joy” in order for her to keep the bag 🙂
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Life’s rich tapestry… we all get a mixed bag… hugsxx
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Ah, I loved this. It has Sally written all over (thank goodness). Very well done!
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Thank you Jennie… a great exercise in brevity, something I have a problem with…..hugs ♥
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I personally like your lack of brevity. 🙂
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Your story reminds me that sometimes we need to lug about our memories to recall how much we cherish keeping them. Great take on the prompt, Sally!
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Thanks Charli… and for the great prompt..hugs
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Hugs, back!
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Making a decision is a good way to lighten up the load as well. Great story, Sally!
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Thank you Olga.. hugsxx
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Ohhhh… I got goosebumps at the end. Well done. ❤
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Thank you Colleen.. ♥♥
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Well done! My daughter met her boyfriend at the recycle store. They had both been married before. I thought it was very appropriate.
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Thank you Darlene… a new start… hugs xxx
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