Here is my response to this week’s Carrot Ranch Flash Fiction Challenge by Charli Mills
February 14, 2019, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story about valentines. It can be Valentine’s Day, the exchange, love for another, romance, or friendship. Have a heart and go where the prompt leads!
Respond by February 19, 2019. Use the comment section below to share, read and be social. You may leave a link, pingback or story in the comments. If you want to be published in the weekly collection, please use the form Rules & Guidelines.
He heard the footsteps of the nurse receding into the distance. She had been in to check on his wife who lay sleeping, her breath shallow and laboured. On the bedside cabinet was a red rose, a replica of the one he had given his love every Valentine’s Day for over fifty years.
He leaned over to take her frail hand in his, and her eyelids fluttered. A faint smile creased her dry lips and a sigh escaped; his long wait was over. Unseen and hand in hand, they slipped passed the nurses’ station into the night, together forever.
©sally cronin 2019
Thanks for reading and I hope you enjoyed….and will participate in the challenge yourself: https://carrotranch.com/2019/02/14/february-14-flash-fiction-challenge/
Beautiful ending.
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Thank you Sadje..
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You’re welcome 😉
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Oh, sniff, sniff….Sally. A sad, fitting, but beautiful thought. Hugs xx
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Thank you Joy…hugsxx♥
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A lovely story and a beautiful ending. We all can hope it goes that way. Thanks, Sally
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Thank you John.. and yes.. perfect.. hugsx
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Reblogged this on anita dawes and jaye marie.
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Thanks for sharing Jaye..hugsxx
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Another sad ending, Sally?
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Not at all Jaye.. they are off together to their next adventure.. hugs ♥
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Everlasting love
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Absolutely xxxx♥
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Oh Sally! This was beautiful!! ❤️
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Thank you Jennie.. ♥
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You’re welcome, Sally!
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Oh, I really like this. Very romantic.
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Thank you Susan..
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Beautiful, Sally. A ghostly twist but so sweet and poignant.
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Thank you Diana.. it would be lovely if it was so… xx
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Very tender. True love.
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Great flash Sal. Your beautiful stories still have all the sentiment even in 99 words. ❤
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Thank you Debby… ♥♥xx
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❤
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You packed in a whole lot of story in just 99 words.
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Thank you Andrew…xx
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A beautiful ending, together forever Hugs xx
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Thank you Carol….glad you enjoyed…hugsxxx
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That’s a very touching story, Sally. I wonder how long he’d been waiting. Now they’ll be together forever. It’s a lovely thought that such a strong love in life endures forever after.
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Thank you Norah… hopefully the same for all of us.. hugsx
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Hopefully. ❤
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A beautiful ending, Sally. What a way to go. Sigh, I hope it’s like that for all of us.
Hugs.
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Thank you Hugh.. and me too… looking forward to showcasing the new book when available.. hugs xx
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So beautiful, Sally! ♥
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Thank you Olga..hugs♥
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Lovely! Heaven comes to those who wait…
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Thank you Liz…
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ooooooo….nice!
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Thank you Sascha.
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🙂
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This is very romantic.
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Thanks Robbie…xxx
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Sally, what a tender story, and you even managed to slip in the surprise as they both departed together.
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Thanks Charli…we can only hope that is what is waiting for us… hugsxx
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