Time for some syllable manipulation in response to Colleen’s Tuesday Poetry Challenge 125.
With the prompt words this week of ‘Origins and Write’ the synonyms that I have chosen are ‘Beginning and Pen’
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From Cave to the Stars – Double etheree
In the beginning we only had voice
to communicate our inner thoughts
and desires within our hearts
until that magical day
of the first cave drawing
and since that moment
we have evolved
and now pen
magic
words
to
express
every
aspect of life
from birth to the grave
and beyond to the stars
where we take our messages
of peace and hope for the future
not language but in digital code
to be received across the universe
©Sally Cronin
If you would like to participate in this wonderful challenge then please click the link: Colleen’s Tuesday Poetry Challenge 125
Profound! You’ve such a talent for writing. Thank you, for sharing.
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Thank you Annette… a much needed distraction this morning… hugs xx
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You are getting so good at these double ehterees, Sally. Well done.
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Thanks Robbie… loving the practice..hugsx
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Your poem is lovely, Sally. I enjoyed reading it. ❤
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Thank you Miriam… hugsx ♥
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You’re welcome, Sally. ❤ xox
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Reblogged this on Jacquie Biggar-USA Today Best-selling author and commented:
Sally Cronin writes a lovely poem on the evolution of writing
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Thanks Jacquie ♥
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You bet!
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Well done, Sally!
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Thank you Jacquie…hugsxx
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What a wonderful use of the double etheree, Sally. Milleniums of creativity in communication. ❤
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Thank you Diana… appreciate that.. hugs ♥
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Sally, this is a fabulous double Etheree. I love your subject and how it all flows. Spectacular!! ❤
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Thank you Colleen. So pleased you liked it.. ♥♥
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It hit me in the heart, Sally! ❤
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♥♥
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Stunning Sal. Your short stories evoked through poetry. ❤ xx
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Thanks Debby…♥♥
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❤
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Oh wow, Sally! This is absolutely brilliant!!! I love it!
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Thank you Jan.. so appreciate that.. hugs ♥
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So beautiful 💜💜
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Thank you Willow…hugs
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💜❤️
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In the beginning… that’s how I started my habit for this prompt! Your poem is beautifully done. The form fits the evolution of the words, of communication.
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Thank you very much, so pleased you liked it…hugsx
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Beautiful! Congrats on being poet of the week – you deserved it! 🙂
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Thank you so much, I appreciate that
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Wonderful sentiments. Well done.
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Thank you very much..
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The subject and form meld perfectly! (K)
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Thank you very much..
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