This week the prompt for the Carrot Ranch Flash Fiction Challenge is Fire…and Charli Mills also shares the performance of a spectacular group of dancers who set the venue alight with their performance. Definitely worth heading over to read and see the photographs.
Fire by Sally Cronin
The firelight flickered across the walls of the cave and the healer stared into the flames.
Fire was a precious gift that had been passed down by their ancestors, but for some it brought a great burden. Those with healing skills saw visions within the heart of the burning mass.
It would not happen in her lifetime, but as the healer sat transfixed by the prophetic images, tears rolled down her wrinkled face. Her time was nearly over, but she hoped, that in the future, one of her descendants would be strong enough to put out the coming conflagration.
©sally Cronin
I hope you have enjoyed my bit of dark flash fiction….and if you would like to participate then please head over: https://carrotranch.com/2019/04/04/april-4-flash-fiction-challenge/
Oh, I like this very much!
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Thanks Annette..hugsx♥
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Nicely done, Sally.
Have a wonder-filled weekend. Hugs!
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Thank you Teagan..hugsx
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Ooooh, this prompt is bringing out some intense pieces, Sally.
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Pretty hot topic Robbie..hugsxx
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Well done you, Sally. Very moving. Hugs xx
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Thank you Joy… ♥
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Well done, Sally!
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Thank you Jennie..hugsx
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You’re welcome, Sally. Hugs to you. 🙂
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Terrific, Sally.
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Powerful piece Sal. Well done! ❤
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Thank you Debby.. ♥
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I hope she’s right. Well done, Sally {{hugs}}
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So do I .. thank you Jacquie..hugsx
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Reblogged this on anita dawes and jaye marie.
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A lovely piece, Sally… A powerfull message too…
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Thank you Jaye…hugsxx
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Well done, Sally! This one i see brings a lot of different ideas up, by all the participants. Have a nice Sunday! Michael
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Fantastic
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Thank you Toni..hugsxx
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Wonderful Sally. I joined in but cheated a bit! Lol. Time is not being kind to me at the moment, my work schedule is punishing…
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A dark and mysterious piece of flash, Sally. Very enjoyable.
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Thank you Hugh..hugsx
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Talk about painting a picture with very few words.
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I am learning to choose my words more wisely in old age… xxx
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Brief but powerful, Sally. Great work! I can see a collection of Flash Fiction in the horizon… 😉
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Powerful ending, the coming conflagration. Yikes.
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Thanks D.. sorry to be the prophet of doom but hopefully many lifetimes in the future… hugs
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I love that this could be both ancient and futuristic. Always, we have the gift and burden of power to manage, pass on and prepare.
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Thank you Charli..hugsxx
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I love, love, love this, Sally! In those few short words, you put me inside her head and made me feel her visions! Well-done!
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Thank you Jan.. I appreciate that. I love the challenge of 99 words.. does focus the mind.. hugsxx
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