This week Colleen’s Tuesday Poetry Challenge 132 has the prompt words ‘Influence and Perception’ and I have chosen ‘ Mould and Sense’ for my Haibun and I have had a little fun with this one….
Life’s Lessons #Haibun by Sally Cronin
As I think about my life, I remember fondly those who have taught me important lessons. Their endeavours to mould me into a civilised individual. To domesticate and remove feral inclinations. To instil in me a sense of moral decency. How to enjoy life to its fullest. Imagine my surprise to determine, that the greatest teacher of all was a dog.
Their eyes have evolved
to look deep within our souls;
better to know man.
Little do we comprehend
how much they have to teach us.
©Sally Cronin 2019
I hope you have enjoyed.. and that you too will participate in this week’s challenge: https://colleenchesebro.com/2019/06/18/colleens-2019-weekly-tanka-tuesday-poetry-challenge-no-132-synonymsonly/
EXCELLENT haibun, and one that is wise and true. It’s a good writer who can express a thoughtful philosophy and observation in so few words.
I miss my dog…..! ;-(
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Thanks Pamela.. I miss mine too.. not sure how I have managed without him… xxx
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❤ I soooooo understand. xo
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Sam! ❤
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♥♥
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What a wonderfu reminiscence! Michael
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Thank you Michael..hugsx
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A lovely haiban, Sally. Sam was a beautiful dog.
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Thank you Robbie.. he creeps in from time to time.. hugsx
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Wonderful, Sally! Sharing…
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Thank you very much Bette..hugsx
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Well done Sal! Beautiful Haibun/Tanka ❤
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Thanks Debby.. stretching my syllabic muscles…♥
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Yes you are! ❤
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Truly beautiful Sally 😀💜
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Thank you Willow..so pleased you enjoyed..hugsx
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I really do like this Haibun 💜
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This was a stupendous haibun/tanka, Sally. We just had a story on our national news about how dog’s eyebrows and eyes have changed through the years to tug at our hearts. Always a pleasure to see the lovely Sam. Sugar and Spice highly approve. ❤
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Thank you Colleen… he came to mind as he often does when I need some inspiration..♥♥
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Oh, I know. Sugar and Spice do that for me also. ♥️
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Wonderful, Sally!
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Thank you Jennie.. xx
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You’re welcome, Sally!
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A beautiful and touching Haibun/Tanka, Sally! I loved it. ❤ xo
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Thank you so much Vashti.. that means a great deal ♥
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