This week on the Carrot Ranch Flash Fiction Challenge by Charli Mills the prompt was ‘Old World Charm’ or words to that effect.. in 99 words no more no less..
The Charm Bracelet.
Keira stood in line with the other teenagers. Dressed in plain cotton overalls, the queue stretched back for miles. Above them, lining the cliff edges, were their families, held back by a tall fence. She looked down at the silver charm bracelet her mother had placed around her wrist as she had said her tearful goodbyes.
‘This will remind you of the old world my daughter, and our love.’
Keira finally reached the head of the line and was called forward by the guardians.
Placing her hand over the bracelet, she stepped through the portal, into the new world.
©Sally Cronin 2019
If you would like to participate in this weeks challenge, here is the link: https://carrotranch.com/2019/08/22/august-22-flash-fiction-challenge/
I have a number of short story collections and you can find my books and their reviews: https://smorgasbordinvitation.wordpress.com/my-books-and-reviews-2019/
Thanks for dropping by and I hope you have enjoyed my story….thanks Sally.
❤️
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Hmmm… well done. Makes me want to know what happened next.
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Thanks Cynthia.. I might have something up my sleeve…hugsx
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Alright!
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Your writing gave me goosebumps, Sally! Well done!
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Thank you Charli, that means a lot..hugsxx
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Wow!! I love this, Sally! I want to step into that new world!
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Thank you Jan.. I think most of us would probably volunteer for that gig at the moment..hugsx
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A lovely story, Sally. A lot can be said in a few words. 💕🤗💕
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Thank you Michelle..hugsx
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Lovely story Sally. 🙂
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Thank you Marje..hugsx
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Sally, what a beauitful story! It takes great writing skill to make a story so meaningful and so complete in just 99 words. 🙂
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Thank you so much Karen..♥
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A lovely story, Sally. Well done.
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Thanks Robbie..hugsx
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nice story; somedays I feel like I’d like to step through a portal to a new world!
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I think there would be a line that stretched for miles.. thanks Jim.
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🙂
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Good one, Sally. A little scary
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yup.. getting that way… hugsxx
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Ooh, this was great Sal. Still with your heartfelt words, yet into a sci-fi world. ❤
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Thanks Debby ♥♥
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❤ xx
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I thought I detected a sci-fi element!
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To go where Sally has not ventured before…..x
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🙂
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So I am not alone! 🙂
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♥
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Love it, Sally! Remembers in a great way on the past. Have a beautiful weekend! Michael
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Thanks Michael and enjoy yours too..hugsx
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:-))
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Sounds like the beginning to a new book (hint hint)
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You never know Annette..hugs ♥
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You’re right–it does!
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Stranger things have happened….x
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Good one for the grey matter to consider,Sally.. Hugs xx.
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That’s what I like to hear Joy..hugsxx
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Excellent story Sally💜💜
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Thank you Willow..have a lovely weekend..♥♥
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Thank you Sally you too 💜
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