This week’s Carrot Ranch Flash Fiction Challenge by Charli Mills was to use the title of one of the greatest western’s of all time True Grit in one form or another.. Since is was my father’s favourite film (along with any John Wayne Western) I have responded with this.
True Grit
Each year on her late father’s birthday, Molly would watch True Grit, his favourite western. This year she was nine months pregnant and hoping after three boys it might be a girl. Her husband rubbed her ankles, passing her tissues as she wept at the end of the movie. The baby kicked and Molly felt a sharp pain.
‘It’s on the way love.’ She smiled at him. ‘I am going to call the baby Mattie, boy or girl.’
‘Thank God, I thought you were going to say Rooster for a minute.’ Laughing and excited they headed out the door.
©Sally Cronin 2019
If you would like to participate you have until September 10th: https://carrotranch.com/2019/09/06/september-5-flash-fiction-challenge/
I have a number of short story collections and you can find my books and their reviews: https://smorgasbordinvitation.wordpress.com/my-books-and-reviews-2019/
I hope you enjoyed my bit of flash and your feedback is always welcome.. thanks Sally.
I love your story, Sally. I hope the baby is a girl, but I’m sure it will be loved regardless of gender. I sense strong feelings of love running through the family.
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I think so Norah and laughter…glad you enjoyed thank you..hugs
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🙂
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I’m sure this conversation will be a part of many birthday parties, Thanksgiving and Christmas dinners for years to come. Great story, Sally! 🙂
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Thank you Shweta.. I am sure you are right…
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My father loved John Wayne movies, too. Mattie is a great name to carry on; much better than Rooster! Makes for good humor in your flash, Sally!
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Thank you Charli it was a great prompt especially as it came out on my parent’s anniversary.. it would have been 79 years..xx
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I loved this as my own Dad was a huge John Wayne fan and Rooster Coogan was the epitome of John Wayne characters. xxx
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Thank you Adele.. and Rooster was and there could never be another John Wayne.. that swagger.. xxx
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My favourite was The Searchers, but it became too emotional to watch it. xxx
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Very much so.. I agree..♥
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Very funny. I hope it’s a girl and like the Mattie in the picture! 🙂
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Me too…hugsxx
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Haha, it’s hilarious, Sally, a good one!
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Thanks Miriam.. glad you enjoyed it.. hugsxx
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You’re welcome, Sally.<3
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Excellent, Sally. (Rooster would have been okay)
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I think a little tough on a girl… you don’t mind being called an old bird at my age… hugsx
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I don’t know this movie, Sally, but it wasn’t required for me to have a good giggle at this.
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Glad you enjoyed but if you get the chance do get the original version with John Wayne.. lovely film.. hugsx
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John Wayne was very good in the movie. I remember reading the book at the time as well and enjoying it.
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The only films that I didn’t like him in were where he was out of uniform of some sort.. western or military. x
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well done; one of my dad’s favorite movies as well!
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Thank you Jim…x
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Sweet; love the ending:)
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Thank you Becky..have a great week..xx
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You, too, Sally!
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You talked about remakes. I haven’t seen a remake yet that was as good as the original, and often wonder — with millions of books out there why the heck do the movie makers continue to do remakes?
My dad’s favorite was Marion Morrison — uh, John Wayne — too. I think we watched every John Wayne movie in existence twice over. 🙂 But it was time with my dad, who worked 2 jobs, and that’s what I treasure the most.
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My father loved company watching a movie and also the comedy shows of the time laughing alone was not as much fun, so I used to get dragged in to watch too.. still remember his laugh…xx
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A sweet moment that I’m sure Molly and her husband will recount to Mattie when he or she is old enough!
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I hope so Liz.. tough it had been Rooster! xx
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One of my favorite movies
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Me too..did not like the remake at all..xxx
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Rooster. Haha! Loved this flash, Sally!
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Thanks Jennie..hugsx
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You’re welcome, Sally. Finally catching up.m
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Priorities Jennie.. and we are not going anywhere..hugs xx
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Definitely! ❤️
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