This week’s prompt for the Carrot Ranch Flash Fiction Challenge by Charli Mills is Romance... in all its glory… It is the glue that keeps a relationship strong along with other elements such as laughter and respect. And your heart can flutter at any age when you receive a romantic gesture, grand or as brief as a touch of a hand on your cheek.
Romantic Gestures.
For sixty years red roses, hearts and grand gestures had been his way of showing how much he loved her. Now as he sat beside her hospital bed he was at a loss. He desperately wanted to make her last moments as love filled as possible; but grand gestures were of no use now. She stirred and turned her head to look at him, attempting to speak. He leant closer to her and heard the words ‘You are the love of my life.’ He smiled and nodded as he kissed her frail hand gently. ‘And you too my darling’.
©Sally Cronin 2019
Thanks for dropping in and I hope you enjoyed the story….and if you would like to participate in this week’s challenge you have until Tuesday November 26th: Carrot Ranch Flash Fiction Challenge by Charli Mills
Aw… *choking back tears*
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oh dear.. sorry Annette..hugs xx
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Beautiful, Sally. No better way to make an exit.
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Thank you John.. how I would like to go..hugsx
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Bittersweet- beautiful, Sally ❤
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Thank you Jacquie..hugs ♥
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This really is delightful, Sally, so romantic and poignant too.
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Thank you Robbie.. hope your girls weekend is going well.. I saw the fondant work earlier..hugs
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I has gone well, but it is quite tiring. The one little girl struggled to sleep last night so I was up with her until late and then she woke up at the crack of dawn. My poor sister will have her hands full tonight…
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early night all round then… ♥
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They had such a good time, Sally. It makes up for the interrupted night.
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Great to hear Robbie.♥
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Precious… ❤
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Thank you Bette..hugs ♥
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So beautiful, Sally. You go right for the heart. Sometimes the simplest words say it all. ❤
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Thank you Diana… no grand gestures needed..♥
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Just sayin’, I just finished writing a review for an amazing book (scheduled review for next week), and writing the review had me reaching for Kleenex – so, I’m glad I still had it handy for this touching tale Sal. ❤
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Look forward to reading your review Debby and glad you enjoyed this too…♥♥
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Always Sal ❤
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wow – so beautifully written. brought tears to my eyes…
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Thank you Jim..hugsx
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Choking back tears, too.
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Sorry Liz..hugsx
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Beautiful! ❤️😘🤗
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Thank you Janice..♥
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Another touching story, Sally, and you manage to convey so much in such a short piece of writing. Very romantic.
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Thank you Olga…glad you enjoyed..hugsx
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Being there. The grandest gesture.
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Thank you D. x
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Beautiful, Sally!
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Thank you Jennie..hugsx
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You’re welcome, Sally. Hugs!
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Perfectly lovely. 🌺🌺
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Thank you very much.. so pleased you liked it..hugs
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The most beautiful love story is the one that ends with having loved, and loved well. This brought tears to my eyes, Sally!
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Thank you Charli, ♥
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