This week for the Carrot Ranch Flash Fiction Challenge by Charli Mills the prompt is ‘Key Lime Pie’.... and I hope you enjoy the ingredients in my story……
Key Lime Pie
My mother-in-law is coming to dinner tonight with the rest of the family. I am staring at a piece of paper she gave me on her last visit, which provides a step-by-step guide to making the perfect key lime pie. Apparently hers are legendary, and have become a tradition on my husband’s birthday since he was five. Even though we have only been married a few months; I know that his mother will be looking for flaws. Which is why I have made a sherry trifle, a dessert I know my husband loves; a new tradition of our own.
©Sally Cronin
If you would like to participate in this week’s Flash Fiction then please head over to Charli’s to find out more: December 6th Carrot Ranch Flash Fiction
My latest release contains a section of flash fiction as well as verse and speculative short stories..
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Thank you for dropping in today and as always your feedback is very welcome..Sally.
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Good for her! Never, ever, try to improve on a mother-in-law’s recipe! Great story, Sally!
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quite right Olga you would never win..lol.hugs
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Great story, Sally. When you can’t compete, make your own tradition. Your sherry trifle looks delicious!
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Quite… especially when there is a mother-in-law involved, luckily my own was a darling..xx
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Lucky! 🙂
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That’s the way to do it! Let his Mum reign with hers, and she’ll win over with one of her own. Such a wise way to live not trying to outshine one another but add to the smorgasbord. I bought your new book. Congratulations on another fine publication!
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Thank you so much Charli, glad you enjoyed the story and thank you for the prompts for the flash fiction section and I hope others will follow the link in the front.. hugsxx♥
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is this fiction or non-fiction? If non-fiction, did you ever make the key lime pie?
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It is fiction Jim… but I do stick to the trifle..hugsx
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trifle is not a bad option!
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I am quite partial, as long as plenty of sherry…x
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🙂
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Oh, yes!! I LIKE this narrator!
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Great thanks Liz..hugsxxx
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Oh, I love this!
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Thank you Jennie.. ♥
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You’re welcome, Sally!
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Great twist! Love it, Sally! ❤
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Thank you Colleen..hugsx♥
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And I say, wise choice! Lol ❤
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Thanks Debby.. lol xx♥
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LOL xxx
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Way to avoid a parent trap, Sally.
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absolutely John xx
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I will never be a mother in law, and very glad about that!
I’m also glad you stuck to your guns, Sally…
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Thanks Jaye.. I won’t be one either and that is okay too..hugsx
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Well done on this great piece, Sally. You and I speak the same language.
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Thank you Robbie.. my first mother-in-law was the devil….lol…xxx
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Wise plan!
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Thanks Becky..hugsx
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Perfect. Great story, Sally. I’m glad she didn’t fall for the “key lime” challenge… a sure miss. The sherry trifle was just desserts. 🙂
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Never take on a mother-in-law at her own game.. or pie! glad you enjoyed thank you Diana..hugs
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