There are names that have been passed down through thousands of years which have powerful and deep-rooted meaning to their bearers. Other names have been adopted from other languages, cultures and from the big screen. They all have one thing in common. They are with us from birth until the grave and they are how we are known to everyone that we meet.
Brian – The Birthright
The firelight from the hearth flickered across the stampeding beasts on the wall of the cave. The clan leader Brynyar lay on the animal pelts and tried to gather his thoughts through the pain. He was old at over forty winters and his bones ached with arthritis.
The gash in his side from the bison during the final hunt of the summer had not healed well, and despite the wound being packed with herbs by the medicine woman, it hurt like hell.
His time was near and he was afraid. Not for what was to come as that was part of the cycle of life. What really worried him was the future of his clan in the changing world around them. Even in his lifetime, he had witnessed the gradual warming of the sun and the melting of ice caps to the north, and this had resulted in massive migrations of the animals they relied on for their food and so much of their daily needs.
The clan would have to move from their ancestral winter caves here in the fertile valley and move with the herds to find a new home. He knew that he would be unable to travel with them, and although he trusted his eldest son of his hearth, he knew what a huge undertaking it would be.
Brynyar rubbed the back of his hand where a birthmark in the form of an arrow darkened its weathered skin. Each one of his sons carried the same blemish and it was right that they do so. They were the fleetest and most successful of the clans, and had a reputation as the finest hunters in the valley. Athletic and fearless they dared to go where others feared to tread, often resulting in injuries and even death. They were also accomplished craftsmen working with flint and bone to produce their much admired weapons. The women were also experts at foraging for the plants, fruits and seeds, needed to sustain them through these long dark winter months.
If they had to follow the herds north, there would be no guarantee that those plants they were familiar with would be available. Nobody knew what the earth so recently released from its icy prison would yield, or if the new rivers would yet be stocked with fish.
The future was uncertain and Brynyar fell into a fitful and painful sleep as the fire in the hearth died down for the last time in his life.
The small clan led by the eldest son of Brynyar’s hearth, packed up their belongings as soon as spring warmed the air in the valley. There were twenty five men, women and children all carrying heavy fur wrapped loads on their backs. With the women in the centre, the men and boys formed a protective perimeter, and as the days warmed they made slow but steady progress. Food was scarce in the beginning, but once they caught up with the herds, they replenished their stocks and set up their summer camp near a river. They were delighted to find that there were indeed fish in the fast flowing icy water from the north, and that the glacier melt had also nourished the surrounding land with its rich silt.
Scouting parties travelled north following the river to find a suitable winter cave, and after two months they came across another clan on the same mission. They combined forces and discovered a series of large caves above the river valley about fifty miles from the summer camp.
With their wind dried meat, rendered fat, constant supply of fresh fish, foraged plants and seeds the two clans settled into their new homes. Over the years more strong and healthy boys with the arrow birthmark were born. As the community grew, from time to time small groups split from the clan and would move on. These bands bearing the mark of the arrow travelled to all parts of the emerging continent; including across stormy seas to Britain and Ireland.
Present Day.
Brian Monaghan looked down at the sleeping child in his arms. His first great-grandchild, and the first to be named Brian in the family for thirty years. He lifted the delicate right hand of the baby and smiled as he saw the familiar arrow birthmark. He and his sons all had this distinctive characteristic. The tales of why they carried this reminder of their ancestry had been passed down through the countless generations by mother to daughter and father to son.
No longer hunters, the clan had dispersed to the four winds and set up homes in villages and cities. However Brian’s ancestors had remained nomadic, travelling through Europe entertaining all that they met with their acrobatic and dangerous performances. With skills honed over many generations, they became the most respected circus family of the present day.
At the end of the summer, the group of families always returned to their winter camp in the southwest of Ireland. Here they would gather their strength, enjoy family life and prepare new and even more daring acts for the next season of performances on the continent.
It was also a time of celebration and new life, and Brian held his great-grandson in both of his hands above his head and turned slowly in the sawdust covered ring.
‘Today we welcome the latest Brian Monaghan to the clan, and this fine strong and sturdy lad will one day take his place amongst you high above the ground.’
The baby’s parents looked on proudly as their son chortled and waved his hands around as if reaching for the trapeze bars in the roof of the tent.
Another generation of the famous Monaghan Circus had made his debut, carrying the mark of his birthright.
©Sally Cronin
I hope that you have enjoyed this story and as always look forward to your feedback. Thanks Sally
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I so enjoyed this story, Sally!
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Thank you Jennie.. Happy New Year.. hugsxx
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You’re welcome, Sally. Happy New Year! 😍
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Thanks, Sally. A very evocative story. I remembered the first part but the ending took me by surprise again. Lovely to see some traditions carry on!
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Thank you Olga.. glad you enjoyed again.. ♥
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I like to hear stories of names, this is a great one.
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Thank you Valentina… Happy New Year.. hugsx
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Mistress of twists. Beautiful Sal. ❤
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Thanks Debby…♥♥
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A true generational story, Sally! You amaze me at what you can do with such few words!
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Thank you Jan… glad you enjoyed..hugsxx
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Really great story, Sally. Love the feeling of continuity.
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Thanks Mary.. I love that feeling of connection to our past too.. it took strong genes and fortitude to enable us to be here… xx
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Reblogged this on Daniel Kemp and commented:
A wonderful writer
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Thank you Danny..hugs
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Brilliant!
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Thanks Danny…hugs
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Your stories are so vivid, it is as though I can see them play out in my head.
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Just what I love to hear Annette..♥
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How amazing to learn that, Sally!! I bet you were intrigued…As to the story, I really enjoyed it. Eighty-four years ago, I was called into my mother’s bedroom and allowed to splash my new baby brother as the midwife bathed him.Guess what she named him? Yep, Brian Charles. (Mum was Welsh, and Brian was similar to Bryn.) He’s been a great brother to me and my older brother, Terence John (Terry) who, at nearly eighty.six, sadly, is very poorly.He’s been at his side whenever needed. Aren’t we a lucky family. Love is all. Hugs xx
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Thank you for sharing that Joy.. and yes how lucky to have had such a long and wonderful relationship with your brothers..♥
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Reblogged this on Author Don Massenzio and commented:
Check out the short story, Brian – The Birthright, by Sally Cronin from this post on her blog.
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In so many ways, the world was better then… wonderful story, Sally, or is it legend?
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Thanks Jaye.my DNA was linked back 20,000 years to a woman’s bones found in a cave on the French/Spanish border. I did this as part of the Cambridge DNA project in 2001 and it was huge shift in how I felt about family. To think that I still carry traces of someone who lived that long ago.. amazing. ♥
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Makes me wonder what we have hiding away…
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Quite…fascinating..xx
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I really like this one. I love how you used history and ancestry to create a compelling tale.
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Thank you Darlene…our common ancestors deserve a pat on the back…I am fond of Brian..hugsx
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A lovely story, Sally. I don’t remember this one which is unusual for me. I am nearly finished your new book. Fantastic!
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Thank you Robbie on both counts and delighted you have enjoyed the latest…I love it that it felt like the first time you had read Brian’s story. hugs
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This was unexpected; I enjoyed it!
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Thank you Liz..hugsx
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You’re welcome, Sally!
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