This week on the Carrot Ranch Flash Fiction Challenge by Charli Mills the prompt was a husband carrying his wife… interesting…
A Dream Home by Sally Cronin
As a girl she didn’t dream of fairy tale weddings or fancy white dresses. She was an orphan, in and out of foster homes, and all she wanted was a house of her own. They met at the local community centre; a carpenter, his hands worn and callused. He asked her what her dream was and she shared her vision. He said nothing, just smiled and nodded. Today, in her simple blue dress, carrying a posy of wild flowers, he swept her into his arms and through the door of the home he had built to show his love.
©Sally Cronin 2020
If you would like to participate in this week’s challenge you have until 14th January: Carrot Ranch Flash Fiction Challenge by Charli Mills
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Thank you for dropping in today and as always your feedback is very welcome..Sally.
What a delightful story of a couple who deserve a chance at happiness.
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Thanks Norah… they do..hugsx
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Such a heart-warming story. Well done.
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Thank you Sam. Glad you enjoyed.
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Bèautiful, small and perfectly formed.
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Thank you so much Ellen.. x
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Its nice to be back seeing old friends again. As good as ever. X
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How romantic, she found her prince 🙂
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You find real ones in the most unlikely places..xx
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I love this!
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Thank you Jennie..hugsx
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You’re welcome, Sally. 🙂
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Aw, I knew he was a good guy when he asked her about her vision. A lovely story, Sally.
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Thanks Charli.. I do like a show rather than tell kinda guy…xxx
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A lovely story, Sally. The beginning made me sad for the girl, but your ending turned to pure joy!
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Thanks Michelle.. it is not how you start but how you finish…♥
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Sometimes fancy words pale in comparison to shutting up and showing your love through actions instead of words. This is a great post. Thank you for sharing!
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Thank you, glad you enjoyed. I agree actions often speak louder than words.
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Awww, what a sweet story, Sally! Thank you for sharing!
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Thank you Jan…hugsx
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Lovely. Short, sweet and perfect. Thanks, Sally!
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Thanks Olga..hugsx
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it’s wonderful how you can reach someone emotionally in just 99 words. well done.
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Thank you Jim…x
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I love this, Sally. It made me feel all squishy inside. ❤
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Thank you Colleen… ♥♥
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Sweet! ❤
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Thank you Bette..hugsx
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Awww! I love the simplicity of this story and her dreams. Well done! xx
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Thank you Angie…hugsxx
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Sounds like a simple sweet life – like the old days Sal. Beautiful! ❤
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A wonderful dream…always good to still have them…♥
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Always. ❤
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So sweet, simple, and romantic, Sally. What a wedding gift! Great story.
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Thank you Diana… xxx
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Simply beautiful!
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Thank you Annette..hugsx
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A sweet story, Sally. I hope you get a log home some day.
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Thank you John…hugsx
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This is lovely, Sally. Your thoughts are so different to mine. I love these prompts as they make you look at a topic quite differently.
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I agree Robbie and that’s what makes these challenges so interesting..hugsx
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A very sweet story!
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Thank you Liz..hugs
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Very amazing, Sally! A modern fairy tale, with a real house, not just a house of gingerbread.
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Thank you Michael I have always wanted to live in a log home… perhaps one day..xx
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Oh yes, thats really an idea. I hope i will remember too.
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