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This the first post by author Stevie Turner and it is a thought provoking poem that explores our natural inclination to comfort ourselves by reflecting on another person’s misfortunes.
I had another clear scan last week, and found this poem I’d written back in 2017 when I was sitting in the main concourse of Addenbrooke’s Hospital nervously drinking tea before having radiotherapy.
Who’s Worse? by Stevie Turner
Here I sit and drink my tea
Before my appointment in Oncology.
A sea of people pass before my eyes,
Fat ones, thin ones; every shape and size.
On their way to who knows what?
Maybe to see a doctor and find out what they’ve got.
Whatever they have I bet I can see
Someone here who’s worse off than me.
Yes, there he is, a little old dude
In a wheelchair and with an oxygen tube.
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Here I sit in my wheelchair and seethe
‘Cos I’ve smoked all my life and now I can’t breathe.
I’m on this pill and that one, green, red and blue,
Still no difference; I can’t even walk to the bloody loo.
Never mind, my old lady will wheel me off
To Respiratory, where they’ll get me to cough
And breathe out into that tube which I can’t do,
Because of cigarettes, ‘cos I’ve smoked quite a few.
Oh well, Maybe I can see
Someone here who’s worse off than me.
There she is, poor old cow,
No arms, no legs, just a torso.
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My motorised wheelchair is the best,
I get around from east to west.
Along the hospital corridors I fly
To see my mate who’s going to die.
I was born this way, I know no other,
I’m used to it; it’s really no bother.
I overtake a dude with an oxygen mask,
Who’s wheezing like every breath’s his last.
And a thin woman sitting drinking her tea,
No hair under that scarf that I can see.
Poor lady, so sad to be that way,
At least I’ll see another day.
She gives me a smile as she sips her tea
As she probably thinks… there’s someone who’s worse off than me.
© Stevie Turner 2019
A selection of books by Stevie Turner
One of the recent reviews for Examining Kitchen Cupboards
In Stevie Turner’s latest novel, Examining Kitchen Cupboards (2019), Jill Hayes takes on a new job In a college exam administration office. She had hoped it would lead to a career but quickly discovered it was much too technical for her skillset. As she struggles to learn the complicated tasks that would allow her to succeed, she stumbles upon illicit activities that she feels honor-bound to report. No one will listen–not the newspapers, the college, or even the agency responsible for the exams–until finally someone does. Things don’t work out as Jill had hoped.
This is a well-told story of a whistle blower’s efforts to fix a serious problem. It is told from various perspectives which adds to the depth of understanding about how complicated it can be to report actions when lots of people don’t want to admit there’s even a problem. It was at times difficult to read but the importance is significant–which is why it earned the 5/5.
Read all the reviews and buy the books: Amazon US
And: Amazon UK
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About Stevie Turner
Stevie Turner works part time as a medical secretary in a busy NHS hospital and writes suspense, women’s fiction, and darkly humorous novels in her spare time. She won a New Apple Book Award in 2014 and a Readers’ Favorite Gold Award in 2015 for her book ‘A House Without Windows’, and one of her short stories, ‘Checking Out’, was published in the Creative Writing Institute’s 2016 anthology ‘Explain!’ Her psychological thriller ‘Repent at Leisure’ won third place in the 2016 Drunken Druid Book Award contest.
Stevie lives in the East of England, and is married with two sons and four grandchildren. She has also branched out into the world of audio books, screenplays, and translations. Most of her novels are now available as audio books, and one screenplay, ‘For the Sake of a Child’, won a silver award in the Spring 2017 Depth of Field International Film Festival. ‘A House Without Windows’ gained the attention of a New York media production company in December 2017.
Some of Stevie’s books are currently being translated into German, Spanish, Italian, and Portuguese.
Connect to Stevie Turner
Website: Stevie Turner Author
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Twitter: @StevieTurner6
Blog: Stevie Turner WordPress
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YouTube: Stevie Turner
My thanks to Stevie for sharing this poem with us and I am sure, that like me, many of you make similar comparisons from time to time. Your thoughts are always welcome. Thanks Sally.
I loved this poem, Sally. Very heartfelt.
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Thanks Robbie.
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I thought it communicated our thoughts about others very well.. xx
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A well-crafted poem with a profound circle of perception. I’m glad Stevie’s scans are clear!
And excellent review. The book sounds like a good one! Thanks for sharing the post, Sally
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Thanks Diana.. I loved the poem.. made me sit and think for quite some time.. x
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Yes, a lot of complex, human emotion coming through the thoughts of the poem’s two speakers.
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Thank you for your comment.
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A wonderful heart touching poem, Sally! Stevie is such a motivated woman. Wish her all the best. Michael
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It is very touching Michael, you have that spot on.. hugsx
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Thanks Michael for your kind words.
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Thanks Sally for sharing, and thanks to all for your comments. x
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Pleasure Stevie, a lovely thought provoking poem. xx
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Reblogged this on Stevie Turner and commented:
Thanks to Sally Cronin at Smorgasbord for sharing one of my more popular posts…
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Thanks for boosting Stevie. xx
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You’re welcome. x
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I love the way this comes full circle. It reminds me of a Facebook post a friend sent me on the subject of viewing your glass as half full or half empty. To do so is to miss the point – the glass is refillable.
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Indeed it is, Cathy.
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That observation was the subject of my Februaruy contribution to the “12 poems in 12 months” challenge on deadlinesforwriters.com (which will find its way onto my blog in due course).
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Thanks for sharing that Cathy.. you are quite right it is refillable…x
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Wow! This is a great poem. It’s all in your perspective, isn’t it?
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It is Darlene.. and this certainly makes that point..xx
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Thanks Darlene. I think to make ourselves feel better we work on the assumption that there is always somebody worse off than we are.
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My dad, to stop us from feeling sorry for ourselves, always said, “No matter how bad it gets, remember there is always someone who is worse off.”
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Absolutely.
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