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This is the second post from December 2020 is by author Elizabeth Merry and shares a selection of her favourite endings to books she has read.
Five Best Endings
I got the idea for this post from Stephen Writes at Top Five Memorable Endings I Read In 2020 – Stephen Writes (wordpress.com) and he kindly allowed me to use his idea. For me the ending of a book, the last sentence, indeed the last paragraph, is very important. Often, especially in thrillers, the last few pages are long-drawn out and boring. So when you love a book, and are approaching the end, it’s great when the last words are just as good – and just as important – as the beginning.
No. 1. The Sisters Brothers by Patrick de Witt
The story is about two brothers, Eli and Charlie Sisters, who are sent by their boss to kill someone. They have various adventures on their journey. The younger of the two is tired of the harsh life they lead and wants to go home. Here’s the wonderful last paragraph:
“I dropped into sleep but awoke with a start some minutes later. I could hear Charlie in the next room, washing himself in the bath tub. He was saying nothing and would say nothing, I knew, but the sound the water made was like a voice, the way it hurried and splashed, chattering, then falling quiet but for the rare drip, as if in humble contemplation. It seemed to me I could gauge from these sounds the sorrow or gladness of their creator; I listened intently and decided that my brother and I were, for the present at least, removed from all earthly dangers and horrors.
And might I say what a pleasing conclusion this was for me.”
No. 2. The Shipping News by Annie Proulx
When Quoyle, discovers that his wife has been unfaithful, he heads for his ancestral home on the wild coast of Newfoundland with his two small daughters. He secures a job on the local paper, reporting on the shipping news. This book is the story of his life there, and the characters he meets. It finishes thus:
“Quoyle experienced moments in all colors, uttered brilliancies, paid attention to the rich sound of waves counting stones laughed and wept, noticed sunsets, heard music in rain, said I do. A row of shining hubcaps on sticks appeared in the front yard of the Burkes’ house. A wedding present from the bride’s father.
For if Jack Buggit could escape from the pickle jar, if a bird with a broken neck could fly away, what else might be possible? Water may be older than light, diamonds crack in hot goat;s blood, mountaintops give off cold fire, forests appear in mid-ocean, it may happen that a crab is caught with the shadow of a hand on its back, that the wind be imprisoned in a bit of knotted string. And it may be that love sometimes occurs without pain or misery.”
No. 3. The Grapes of Wrath by John Steinbeck
I’m sure everyone knows this story of the Joad family, and their trek through the Oklahoma dust bowl during the great depression of the 1930s in America. At the end of the book they take shelter in a barn where they find a man dying of hunger, and his small son. The daughter of the family, Rose of Sharon, (Rosasharn) has just given birth to a still-born child, and sharing a deep look with her mother, agrees to breast-feed the dying man:
“For a minute Rose of Sharon sat still in the whispering barn. Then she hoisted her tired body up and drew the comforter about her. She moved slowly to the corner and stood looking down at the wasted face, into the wide, frightened eyes. Then slowly she lay down beside him. He shook his head slowly from side to side. Rose of Sharon loosened one side of the blanket and bared her breast. ‘You got to,’ she said. She squirmed closer and pulled his head closed. ‘There,’ she said. ‘There.’ Her hand moved behind his head and supported it. Her fingers moved gently in his hair. She looked up and across the barn, and her lips came together and smiled mysteriously.”
No. 4. The Third Policeman by Flann O’Brien
From the blurb on the back of this book – It is a murder thriller, a hilarious comic satire about an archetypal village police force, a surrealistic version of eternity, and a tender, brief, erotic story about the unrequited love affair between a man and his bicycle.
“We saw, standing with his back to us, an enormous policeman. His back appearance was unusual. He was standing behind a little counter in a neat whitewashed dayroom; his mouth was open and he was looking into a mirror which hung upon the wall.
‘It’s my teeth,’ we heard him say abstractedly and half-aloud. ‘Nearly every sickness is from the teeth.’
His face, when he turned, surprised us. It was enormously fat, red and widespread, sitting squarely on the neck of his tunic with a clumsy weightiness that reminded me of a sack of flour. The lower half of it was hidden by a violent red moustache which shot out from his skin far into the air like the antennae of some unusual animal . . . He came over ponderously to the inside of the counter and Divney and I advanced meekly from the door until we were face to face.”
‘Is it about a bicycle?’ he asked.
No. 5. Born To Run by Bruce Springsteen
I’ve always been a fan of The Boss and I know he writes his own songs, but still, I was a bit surprised by how good his writing is in this autobiography. The book flowed along and I thought the prose was delicious. This is how he finishes the book – he is riding his motorbike south to Manasquan Inlet:
“My “ape hanger” high-rise handlebars thrust my arms out and skyward to shoulder height, opening me up to the winds full force – a rough embrace – as my gloved hands tighten their grip on that new evening sky. The cosmos begins to flicker to life in the twilight above me. With no fairing, a sixty-mile-per-hour gale steadily pounds into my chest, nudging me to the back of my seat, subtly threatening to blow me off six hundred pounds of speeding steel, reminding me of how the next moment holds no guarantees . . . and of how good things are, this day, this life, how lucky I’ve been, how lucky I am. I turn the corner off the highway onto a dark country road. I hit my high beams, scan the flat farm fields looking for deer. All clear, I twist the throttle as rushing into my arms comes home.”
That will do for now. Reading all these wonderful writers makes me question my ability to write, or even to put a sentence together. I’m very happy that the world is full of so many wonderful books – I’ll probably do another five endings in the future!
©Elizabeth Merry 2020
About Elizabeth Merry
Elizabeth Merry was born in Bangor, Co Down in the province of Ulster but has spent most of her life in Co Dublin. She has been writing for many years and has previously published a novel for children and many short stories. The present book “We All Die in the End” is a series of interlinked “scenes” set in a seaside town on the Ulster coast where most people know each other. It is a book filled with miserable couples, meddling siblings, or individuals struggling to survive. Some of the “scenes” are twisted, some are macabre, and more than a few deal with abusive relationships. But there is joy here too, and a lot of dark humour.
Elizabeth is, at present, working on a collection of poetry, much of which has been published over the years in literary magazines.
Books by Elizabeth Merry
An extract for one of the recent reviews for We All Die in the End
Without a doubt, this collection of short stories was the most well-curated of any I’ve seen. Not only did the stories fit together well thematically, and not only did they have the same general setting, but they wove into each other by mentioning various characters that showed up later. For instance, the first story is about Arthur, but he talks about Jennifer and her dogs. Jennifer shows up in the next story, and they introduce other characters. Carmel works at the grocer’s, and Julia and Sadie down at the pub are mentioned repeatedly.
It. Just. Works.
Most of the stories make you think, and many contain complex social relationships that only reveal themselves in their fullness at the end. That being said, I sure wouldn’t want to live in this town – too many bad guys and terrible people! There weren’t many characters I could really get behind and root for, as many of them were morally gray or completely decrepit. Even so, they were all interesting, and Merry writes very well.
Read the reviews and buy the books: Amazon US – And: Amazon UK – Follow Elizabeth: Goodreads – Blog: Embookstuff WordPress – Twitter: @ElizabethMerry1
Thanks for dropping in today and I know that Elizabeth would love your feedback.. thanks Sally.
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Fabulous post, Sally. Thanks.
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Delighted to share John…hugsx
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Thank you for this very interesting posting, Sally! If there is no happy, there at least needs to be a important ending. 🙂 Thank you for the rieview of “We All die in the End”. What a title for these days. I think i also will gift it to some. 😉 Enjoy a beautiful evening. Michael
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Thanks Michael it is an intriguing title…enjoy your evening too..hugs
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Thank you very much, Sally! As you can see, i did. 😉 Michael
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Very interesting post! Thanks, Sally and Elizabeth. ❤
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Thanks Carol.. enjoy the rest of the week..hugs ♥
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Great share of good endings. I like the Grapes of Wrath best. ❤
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Elizabeth’s commentary on books and her reading choices always intrigue me. I haven’t read any of these and think now that at least I need to pick up The Grapes of Wrath. What a great post. Thanks for sharing, Sally.
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Thanks Diana.. the art of leaving a reader with such an indelible reminder of a book is an art.. I need to practice more… hugsx
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We all do. Sigh.
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Fantastic examples here, Sally! That scene from the Grapes of Wrath was one that has stayed with me since I was a teenager and first read it. Thank you for sharing!
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The sign of a great book Jan. Elizabeth certainly shared the best.. hugsx
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Such a good post, Sally and Elizabeth – what amazing endings. Toni x
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I agree Toni.. we all try to focus on getting the attention of readers with our opening sentences but sometimes forget to leave them with something memorable..hugsxx
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Wonderful, Sally and Elizabeth!
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Thank you Gwen..hugsx
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Reblogged this on Judith Barrow and commented:
Sally shares Elizabeth Merry’s collection of Five Best Endings
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Thanks very much for sharing Judith…hugsx♥
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My pleasure, Sally. I really enjoyed the post. xx
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Amazing endings. I love The Shipping News. Endings can be so powerful.
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I agree Darlene…they call you back to the book time after time.. hugsx
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This is a great idea for a post, Sally. I’ve only seen it done as introductory paragraphs before. I have just finished A FArewell to Arms by Ernest Hemmingway and I am still getting over the sadness of the ending.
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Funny how the poignant and the tragedy stay with us longer than the Happy Ever After..xx
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Yes, to an extent. Mind you the ending of A Gentleman in Moscow was happy and I was so worried it wouldn’t be. It was a big relief that it was. I am writing my review now. It is difficult to capture the magnificence of that book in a review.
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Not come across that book Robbie so look forward to reading… hugsxx
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Sally, thanks a milion for this post. I really appreciate it.
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Pleasure Elizabeth and delighted you have some lovely comments.. hugs
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