Since this series began in January 2018 there have been over 1100 Posts from Your Archives where bloggers have taken the opportunity to share posts to a new audience… mine.
The topics have ranged from travel, childhood, recipes, history, family and the most recent series was #PotLuck where I shared a random selection of different topics. This series is along the same lines… but is a ‘Lucky Dip’
In this series I will be sharing posts from the first six months of 2021 – details of how you can participate are at the end of the post.
This is the second post from author D.L (Denise) Finn and was in response to a Fiction in a Flash ChallengeSuzanne Burke ‘Fiction in a Flash Challenge 2021 #39.’
Photo by Amanda Cottrell from Pexels
The Last Ride of the Night
The monsters remained in the shadows…. waiting. My husband and I sat at the top of the Ferris Wheel. Any other time I would have enjoyed the view, but not with death lurking below us. Pete had his arm wrapped protectively around my shoulders as the last hopeless scream faded away from the older man who operated the ride. The same man who had just winked at us and said we had the ride all to ourselves because it was almost closing time. We didn’t even know the name of the hero who had stopped the ride right before… No, I couldn’t think about that.
I tried to dial 911, but there was no signal. I couldn’t text or email. There was no way to communicate or get information.
“We’re safe up here, Lacy.”
“What if they climb up?”
“These creatures can barely walk. They are like zombies.”
I nodded, watching the monsters make their way toward a building that a family had just run into. I’d seen the beautiful family in line when we got our favorite chocolate swirl ice cream in a cup. The two young boys had been so excited about seeing their first monster trucks at the show. I hope the actual monsters didn’t find them now.
Our car swayed, and my hand dug into Pete’s leg.
“What if they knock the wheel down?” My mouth was so dry the words barely escaped.
“It’s too heavy, don’t worry, sweetheart.” Pete handed me my water bottle. The cool liquid soothed my throat.
Words spilled out of me. “All I can do is worry. How can we not? We were enjoying our night at the fair. Heck, we even danced to our song. If we hadn’t had to ride this thing, we’d be safe in our car escaping this… whatever it is. These things came out of nowhere, and it feels like we’re in a horror movie. This can’t be real. Do you think it’s all a show?”
For the first time, I felt hopeful. Yes, it wasn’t real.
Pete’s mouth tightened. “I wish it weren’t real; I really do. You saw what they did to our friends, they…”
Tears overflowed my eyes as I glanced at the dark forms on the ground by the cinnamon rolls. Thankfully, the glow of the colorful fair lights missed them. Yet, I could see their bodies weren’t intact. I shuddered as my fear overflowed until there was nothing left. Pete put his head on top of mine, and we just held each other, listening to the screams and car horns.
“Many people got away. And surely help is coming,” I sniffled as Pete handed me a Kleenex always kept tucked away in his jean pocket.
A rumble was headed in our direction. It was a helicopter! It hovered over the fair, shining its light. Soon another one joined.
“We’re saved!” I cried as Pete stood waving franticly as the car swayed heavily.
A voice came over the loudspeaker as a siren flashed in the distance. “We see you, sir. Remain seated. We will get you out of there.”
“Thank you!” Pete called, but I don’t think they heard him as they began shooting.
The monster’s bodies piled up quickly. Soon three men and a woman repelled down ropes. I had never been happier to hear the steady rain of bullets.
“There’s one! Lookout!” We heard a woman’s voice.
Another barrage of popping and it then stopped. Then the doors opened to the photography building where that family had hidden. I was relieved to see them exit safely. The Ferris Wheel lurched into motion.
“It’s over!” I hugged Pete.
“I told you it would be okay up here.”
I was never so glad to stand on the damp grass. Soldiers wearing gas masks rounded up survivors.
“Attention!” A loud voice boomed, and everyone fell silent.
“There has been a bio-attack on your community and others like yours. Those who have no symptoms in the morning will be taken into quarantine. We will offer you a protective vaccine at that point. Food, water, and blankets will be provided after you check-in.”
Pete took my hand. He never let go of me as we listened to gunshots and tractors removing the infected victims. We survived the night, but many didn’t. After being disinfected, we left behind a town we’d never see again as we were relocated into the new normal.
©D.L. Finn 2021
My thanks to Denise for letting me share one of her spooky stories…
D.L. Finn is an independent California local who encourages everyone to embrace their inner child. She was born and raised in the foggy Bay Area, but in 1990 relocated with her husband, kids, dogs, and cats to the Sierra foothills in Nevada City, CA. She immersed herself in reading all types of books, but especially loved romance, horror, and fantasy. She always treasured creating her own reality on paper. Finally, being surrounded by towering pines, oaks, and cedars, her creativity was nurtured until it bloomed. Her creations vary from children’s books, young adult fantasy, and adult paranormal romance to an autobiography with poetry. She continues on her adventures with an open invitation for her readers to join her
A selection of books by D.L. Finn for adults and children
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How you can feature in the series?
- All I need you to do is give me permission to dive in to your archives and find two posts to share here on Smorgasbord. (sally.cronin@moyhill.com)
- Rather than a set topic, I will select posts at random of general interest across a number of subjects from the first six months of 2021. (it is helpful if you have a link to your archives in your sidebar by month)
- As I will be promoting your books as part of the post along with all your information and links so I will not be sharing direct marketing or self- promotional posts in the series.
- If you are an author I am sure you will have a page on your blog with the details, and an ‘about page’ with your profile and social media links (always a good idea anyway). I will get everything that I need.
- As a blogger I would assume that you have an ‘about page’ a profile photo and your links to social media.
- Copyright is yours and I will ©Your name on every post… and you will be named as the author in the URL and subject line.
- Previous participants are very welcome to take part again.
- Each post is reformatted for my blog and I don’t cut and paste, this means it might look different from your own post.
- If I do share a post which contains mainly photographs I will share up to five and link back to the original post for people to view the rest.
N.B – To get the maximum benefit from your archive posts, the only thing I ask is that you respond to comments individually and share on your own social media.. thank you.
She had me at the first line!
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agreed Dorothy..hugsx
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Thank you, Dorothy 🙂 Glad you liked it!
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This was such a GOOD story from Denise! Thank you for sharing it here, Sally!
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I agree Jan.. brilliant..hugsx
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Thank you, Jan:) I’m so hapoy you enjoyed it!
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Totally changed the way I view Ferris wheels. Great story, Denise.
Thanks, Sally.
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Thanks Staci…hugsx
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I usually am not a fan of riding them, Staci. It would be a safe place to be though just in case 😉 Thanks!
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Wonderful story for October.
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It is thanks Craig…hugsx
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Thanks, Craig 🙂
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I remember this story. Powerful then, powerful now. Excellent tale from Denise.
Thanks for sharing, Sally!
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Thank you, Mae 🙂 I had fun writing this one.
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I loved this story the first time, and it’s even better second go! Great share, Sally. Hugs 💕🙂
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Thanks Harmony…lovely story..hugsx
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Thank you, Harmony 🙂 I’m happy to hear that!
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Wonderful choice from Denise’s archives, Sally. I loved it when I read it the first time. Thank you for sharing! 🙂
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Thanks very much Miriam…hugsx
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You’re welcome, Sally. I just emailed you. ❤
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Received Miriam and on the list ♥
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Thank you, Miriam 🙂 It makes me happy you enjoyed it.
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Such a compelling story from Denise. Thanks for sharing this, Sally.
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I’m glad you enjoyed it, Beem 🙂 Thank you!
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Thanks Beem..x
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Very atmospheric. What a view they had. I think I’d have kept my eyes closed all the time, though.
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Thank you, Hugh 🙂 I am usually the person who does.
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You and me both Hugh xxx
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Whew! That was gripping. And glad they were headed back to normal. 🙂 ❤
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Thank you, Debby! Yes, heading back to their new normal was a relief it went in that direction 😉
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Thanks Debby ♥
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Thank you for having me here today, Sally, and making a great pick from the past! Xo
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Delighted to share Denise.. great story..hugsx
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I remember this story, Sally. I thought that Denise looks like an angel but she writes so well about demons.
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Lol.. the skill of a brilliant storyteller Robbie..hugsx
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That comment made me giggle, Robbie!
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This story gives me one more good reason for avoiding fairgrounds and amusement parks: monsters!
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Yiu never know, Liz…lol But then being on a ride was life saving too 😉
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Good point!
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Lol..I only like in daylight…xx
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What a wonderful share! Thanks girls.
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Thank you, Balroop 🙂
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Thanks Balroop ♥
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Reblogged this on OPENED HERE >> https:/BOOKS.ESLARN-NET.DE.
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Thank you for the reblog!
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Gosh, i should not have read this so late. Lol Denise really has a knack for spooky stories. Thanks for sharing, Sally! xx Michael
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Thank you, Michael 🙂 Yes, sometimes it takes some light reading after these types of stories to go to sleep…LOL
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Lol… Denise certainly has Michael..hugsx
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A great story, Denise. Thanks to Sally for the feature.
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Thank you, John 🙂
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Thanks John..hugsx
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I read this story a while back. Enjoyed it even more this time. Thanks for sharing, Sally.
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That’s good to hear, Joan 🙂
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I was engaged the whole time. I couldn’t help but wonder if people refused the vaccine?
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I expect so Pete.. great story…xx
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I think it would be go feal with the zombies 😉
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I remember this flash fiction from when Denise first wrote it. It’s such a great story (as was the second part). Thanks for sharing it today, Sally! 🙂
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Thanks Yvette and I enjoyed to when I read on Denise’s blog…great story..hugsx
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Great story from Denise, Sally, and very creepy. Perfect for October.
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Agreed Diana.. and gave me chills..xxx
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