Over last few weeks I have shared some syllabic poetry and 99 word flash fiction from my collection Life’s Rich Tapestry…woven in words
Today – two pieces of flash…..
Rock Star
The performance came to a climax, the singer whipping sweat laden hair around in a frenzy. Voice gravelly with fatigue, he growled out the final lyrics, gyrating across the stage. The last notes faded to the roar of the crowd. Thrusting his guitar above his head, he backed into the wings. Grabbing a towel he headed to his dressing room, eager for what waited for him. He sat back in the chair satisfied. Nothing like a fish paste sandwich and glass of cold milk to end the night. He smiled at the woman. ‘Thanks Mum just what I needed.’
Splashing Good Time
Her husband insisted she was incapable of learning to drive, refusing to pay for lessons as a waste of time and money. After seven years she found her own voice, and grateful there were no children to witness her failure, she left. With a new job, cottage and money to make her own way, she passed her driving test first time, and purchased a small car. One day torrential rain filled the drains, creating deep puddles each side of the road. She saw him walking along the pavement. Smiling, she swished passed him, creating a wonderfully drenching big splash.
©Sally Cronin 2022
One of the reviews for Life’s Rich Tapestry: Woven in Words
The book lives up to its title–indeed, Sally Cronin has woven a rich tapestry of life in words of many kinds. A variety of poetry–in forms unfamiliar in name to me, microfiction and short stories. What’s more, the graphic imagery of the short poems is inspiring to a person like me who has never really found poetry either appealing or easily understood. This time, for a change, the words grabbed me. I found meaningful passages that could be useful as well in prose writing as in poetry. Examples I must return to in settings or other places where showing and not telling is essential.
The microfiction and short stories were equally compelling, all the more so for me who is focused on those forms of writing. So, perhaps I too should consider the combination of ingredients that Sally Cronin published in this book. She is a writer worth reading
Thank you for listening and if you would like to know more about my books and their reviews you can find them on my books page Sally’s Books and Reviews 2022
Love the big splash!
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Thanks Dorothy.. very satisfying lol..hugxx
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Thanks for sharing Michael..hugsx
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You are so great in bringing social happenings to the point, Sally! All with a smile an an eyewink. The second one is so realized feminism. :-)) Enjoy your afternoon, Sally! hugsx Michael
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Thanks Michael…glad you got the wink… enjoy your Sunday afternoon too..hugsx
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Two wonderful stories, Sally. So much in only 99 words! Even rockstars love their mums. And that husband deserved a little drenching. I don’t think failed at all. 🙂
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Thanks Diana… he had that drenching coming lol…♥
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Great! Loved listening in, Sally…
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Thanks very much Bette ♥
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As diana says so much in so few words! I also love the twists you give to the endings of all your lovely tales. I’m reading this book at the moment and really loving it – so much variety and so many moods. xx
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That is a lovely comment thank you Alex and delighted you are enjoying the collection. I had fun putting it together and it means a great deal. ♥♥
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Genuinely enthralled by the collection. All different, all delivering emotions – some of them delightfully unexpected! xx
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I love your revenge stories! This one was gleefully satisfying.
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It is amazing how satisfying a little bit of rebellion can be Liz lol.. xxx
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I love both of these Sally. Both have unique twists. And your voice brings them to life!
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Thanks very much Jan ♥
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Wonderful, Sally. Toni x
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Thanks Toni ♥
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Loved The Rock Star. The onstage description was wonderful, and the twist at the end. I would have loved to have managed a rock star like that! No backstage punch-ups, hissy fits, and drama. Loved it. such fun FF Sally, all of them. Thanks and well done. Tweeted. xx
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Thanks very much Jane.. glad you enjoyed the twist and yes, I doubt you have many artists who were in the sandwiches and a cuppa lol..hugsx
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LOL actually yes, mainly Taco Bell and In and Out Burger and Red Bull. The guys were into Red Bull with Vodka or Grolsch beer, but in the main builder’s tea. But as for harmony lol another story!!
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Loved listening and reading along.
Two short sweet stories.
I did love the big splash!
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Thanks very much Sue..♥
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Lovely way of using the point of view in the first story, Sally, and you know I’m pretty partial to a good revenge story. ♥
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Thanks Olga and glad you enjoyed the splashing… hugs ♥
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Lol love these Sal – a mother’s love, and sweet karmic revenge, lol. ❤
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Thanks Debby… nothing like a little dunking now and then.. ♥
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