Over last few weeks I have shared some syllabic poetry and 99 word flash fiction from my collection Life’s Rich Tapestry…woven in words
Today – Recycling Centre and Storm Windows
Recycling Centre.
Having followed the signs to the centre, she stood in line. It was almost time to relinquish the baggage she dragged behind her. It contained items representing her life, the good, bad and ugly. Admittedly there had been much love and laughter mixed with the heartache. However, the invitation to recycle unwanted items offered a new start.
Holding out the suitcase to the man she hesitated. ‘Can I remove some things?’
‘Sorry ’, he smiled kindly. ‘It’s all or nothing.’
Loading the bag into the car, it seemed lighter than when she arrived, despite choosing to keep it all.
Storm Windows.
She looked out through the slightly distorting storm windows that protected the house from the harsh winds that swept onto the coast from America. This part of Ireland was notorious for its harsh winters, but also its outstanding coastal views and warm-hearted people.
She had moved here to escape her past, and preferred the natural violence of the weather to that she had endured for many years.
She sighed as she turned to face the man in the room. Another more dangerous storm had breached the defences and windows would not protect her. It was time to be brave.
©Sally Cronin 2022
One of the reviews for Life’s Rich Tapestry: Woven in Words
The book lives up to its title–indeed, Sally Cronin has woven a rich tapestry of life in words of many kinds. A variety of poetry–in forms unfamiliar in name to me, microfiction and short stories. What’s more, the graphic imagery of the short poems is inspiring to a person like me who has never really found poetry either appealing or easily understood. This time, for a change, the words grabbed me. I found meaningful passages that could be useful as well in prose writing as in poetry. Examples I must return to in settings or other places where showing and not telling is essential.
The microfiction and short stories were equally compelling, all the more so for me who is focused on those forms of writing. So, perhaps I too should consider the combination of ingredients that Sally Cronin published in this book. She is a writer worth reading
Thank you for listening and if you would like to know more about my books and their reviews you can find them on my books page Sally’s Books and Reviews 2022
Lovely story, Sally. Your stories are some of the best! 💜
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Thanks very much Colleen ♥
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You’re always welcome. ❣️
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Hi Sally, two excellent pieces. I would be happy to hand over my baggage right now.
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I am sure that you could do with a lighter load Robbie… I hope Michael is doing better ♥♥
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Thanks, Sally. Michael is having another operation next week as the surgery on the right hand side wasn’t successful.
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Poor guy and it must be very stressful for you too.. I hope this time it is successful.. ♥
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In the second poem i am sure there are some interesting experiences of yourself, right? 😉 The first one is also great. One cannot give away things bound with deep memories. Thanks for sharing this wonderful poetry, Sally! Enjoy a nice Sunday evening! hugsx Michael
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Thanks so much Michael..hugsx
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Both lovely, Sally. The recycling issue is one we all face at one time or another. Let go, or keep it? Thank you for sharing!
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Thank you Jan… ♥
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Two heavier stories, Sally, though sometimes the decision to keep all of our life experiences, the good and the bad, can be freeing. I hope the woman in the second story continues to be brave.
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Thanks Diana and I believe both the good and the bad have contributed to who we are now… and in my mind she would continue to be brave ♥♥
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Aww.
I was always known for hoarding all of mythings… every time I decide to throw something away I know sometime later I might need it.
My deputy head gave me a special story called ‘Dora the Storer; and I think that’s me and my sisters.
We hoard, pass it on and then end up getting it all back again in some way.
It is indeed an idea for a story I might write one day.
‘Janes Jumble’ lol
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We have decluttered but there is still many treasures that I will never be able to part with.. ♥
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Yes I certainly won’t get rid of many of my things but … not sure my children will want them.
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Sadly I don’t think the younger generation will want any of ours either Sue.. ♥
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A definite theme with these two good stories Sal. ❤ xx
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Thanks Debby… ♥♥
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Fantastic, Sally – and so beautifully spoken. Toni x
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Thanks very much Toni.. ♥
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Very atmospheric, Sally, and I love the suitcase metaphor. It works beautifully.
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Thanks very much Olga ♥
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What a contrast between these two pieces!
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Some baggage carries more weight than others. x
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So much packed into so few words. These are both powerful and very moving. You excel at capturing emotions and ending with a twist or memorable punch. I’m experiencing the same delight and pleasure with Flights of Fancy. xx
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Thanks so much Alex and delighted you enjoyed and are enjoying Flights of Fancy too.. ♥♥
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