Some more poetry and flash fiction from one of my collections.
Today, the first songs a baby may hear is its mother or father singing them to sleep, with some enhancements depeding on the babies needs at the time…. and taking the first step into a new world or environment is made easier if you are sent on your way with love.
Lullaby and The Charm Bracelet by Sally Cronin
Lullaby
to sing
a lullaby
you must first consider
preferences of the baby
waiting
perhaps
a jolly song
aimed to make them chortle
to wave their hands around with glee
happy
maybe
slow and gentle
soothing a fractious mood
or the soreness of teething gums
tearful
deep toned
to reassure
those fearing the shadows
now allayed by a father’s voice
safety
language
a foreign tongue
but words that mothers sing
to babies all around the world
loving.
The Charm Bracelet.
Keira stood in line with the other teenagers. Dressed in plain cotton overalls, the queue stretched back for miles. Above them, lining the cliff edges, were their families, held back by a tall fence. She looked down at the silver charm bracelet her mother had placed around her wrist as she had said her tearful goodbyes.
‘This will remind you of the old world my daughter, and our love.’
Keira finally reached the head of the line and was called forward by the guardians.
Placing her hand over the bracelet, she stepped through the portal, into the new world.
©Sally Cronin 2023
One of the recent reviews for my latest collection.
A beautiful collection of short stories and poetry that cover life, love, loss and the natural world around us. The title encapsulates the content wonderfully it is a beautifully written book with my favourites being the short stories particularly the elderly couple and their beloved pet and the healer both of which tugged at my heartstrings…
Thank you for listening and if you would like to know more about my books and their reviews you can find them on my books page My books and reviews 2023
I love that lullaby!!
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Thanks very much Liz.. xxx
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You’re welcome, Sally.
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Sal, these were both so moving and poignant – the familiar sounds to a baby, and stepping into the new world with forever love. ❤ xx
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Thanks very much Debby.. We all step into new worlds during our lifetime or it feels like it and being sent on our way with love is comforting. ♥♥
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Absolutely Sal ❤ xx
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That’s beautiful, Sally! The first voice a baby recognizes is the mom’s because he/she hears it while it’s developing. Our tone communicates so much more than our words. 🙂
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
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Thank you Yvette and I agree.. singing and playing music to a baby before it is born is a good place to begin that bonding.. ♥
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You have the most restful voice, Sally. There is warmth and joy that flows through your storytelling. Beautiful.
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Thanks so much Rebecca ♥♥
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The Charm Bracelet is an amazing story, Sally! Toni x
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Thanks very much Toni ♥♥
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Reblogged this on Judith Barrow and commented:
“A beautiful collection of short stories and poetry that cover life, love, loss and the natural world around us.”
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Thank you for sharing.
I enjoy listening
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Great thanks Sue hugsx
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Beautiful, Sally! Thank you for sharing. xo
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Thanks very much Jill.. hugsx
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This is beautiful, Sally! 💖
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Thank you Eugenia ♥
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You’re welcome, Sally!
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Poignant pieces today, Sally. The lullaby was wonderfully gentle and reassuring. And your story touched my heart. Thanks for starting my day with a smile.
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Happy to hear that Diana.. thank you.. ♥
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That first voice of a mom or a dad is so important. That is why reading to a baby from the day they are born, or even before, is so important. I loved the poem.
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Lovely poetry and fiction, Sally. This book was an excellent read!
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Thanks very much Colleen I appreciate that very much xx
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You’re so welcome, Sally. Well deserved praise. xx
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Beautiful. And the story… Well, there could be a much long one there if you wanted, Sally. ♥
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Thanks Olga.. perhaps although I think I am not sure I have enough sci-fi know how to write anything full length.. ♥
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Lovely reading, Sally. I remember both of these beautiful pieces. The poem is absorbing…with the last word in each stanza holding the listener/reader. And the charm bracelet is very touching. Sending a hug… 🤗
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Thank you so much Gwen and for your lovely comment. Have a fabulous week ♥
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What a beautiful lullaby, Sally, that reminds me of when I used to sing the short lullaby that I wrote for our children. Precious memories so many years ago…
And your wonderful fiction was so touching. Thank you for sharing!
By the way, I’m working on a review for Variety is the Spice of Life that I’ll post with some others. It should be live in the next week or two. I’m not sure if you follow me, but keep your eyes open. Or I can email you, whichever you prefer. I loved your book and you are such a gifted storyteller and poet. 💗
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Thank you so much Lauren and very kind of you to review. Please send me the link to the post if could and then I can share around and boost the other authors at the same time.. have a lovely week. ♥
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I will do that, Sally. Have a wonderful week too! 💞
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Both of these are lovely, Sally. I love the way Lullaby’s tone changes with the baby’s mood or needs.
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Thanks very much Jan ♥
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Lullaby was one of my favourites from your new book, and your flash fiction always manages to convey so much. Lovely review from Carol as well. ♥♥
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Thanks again Alex for your lovely review ♥♥
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Lovely lullaby, Sally.
I also enjoyed reading the unique transition from adolescence to adulthood and could relate as a high school teacher 🙂 x
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Thanks Luciana it must be interesting to watch and participate in the process… and rewarding..♥
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