Some more poetry from some of my collections.
We have celebrated quite a few birthdays in our family in the last couple of months and here is a garland Cinquain about these special days.
Birthdays
birthdays
a reminder
of the passing of years
celebrated with lit candles
and cake.
wrinkles
are etched on skin
laughter lines they tell you
signs of character and a life
well lived
people
in the present
and in our memories
are thought of with love as this day
passes
how fast
they come around
the older that we get
a caution to make the most of
each day.
tempting
as it might be
to disregard this date
it stands as a testament to
our lives
birthdays
are etched on skin
and in our memories
a caution to make the most of
our lives.
©Sally Cronin 2023
One of the recent reviews for the collection.
Life is Like a Mosaic is a lovely collection of poetry that lifts the heart and the spirit. The author has the innate ability to create beautiful poems, thoughts, rhymes with words as if she has a magic wand.
She weaves ordinary words and creates the extraordinary before our eyes. There are fifty poems to enjoy covering feelings, experiences, hope, love, heartache, joy, friendship among others. She recalls her childhood memories, holidays, friends and other thoughts in flowing and creative rhyming poetry that takes one away to his/her own childhood nostalgically.
The colorful cover tells a tale all its own of life that can be so fractured yet somehow comes together in a beautiful way. The poems she creates give us hope in a troubled world of what is possible if we think positively. As she says in the poem, ‘Hope, Hope still springs eternal’.
I enjoyed all these wonderful poems but especially enjoyed ‘The Sunflower – One, and Sunflower – Two.’ In these two poems Sally expresses her thoughts – ‘Witness the sunflower as she swivels to stare and worship the gold god. Symbol of health and life the sunflower brightens every field that she graces.’
As I read all these poems I fell uplifted and free, all my troubles melted away. It was a beautiful feeling as I traveled along her words to float and flitter, my heart beating rhythmically with her lilting words. I highly recommend this beautiful collection. Thank you, Sally Cronin!
Thank you for listening and if you would like to know more about my books and their reviews you can find them on my books page My books and reviews 2023
Lovely, Sally. You have the perfect voice for reading poetry, and this one is especially heartwarming. ❤️
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Thanks very much Gwen ♥♥
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I loved your reading of the birthday poem. It spoke directly to me in so many ways.
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Thanks so much Liz ♥
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You’re welcome, Sally. 🙂
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Wow, I especially love the last stanza
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Thanks very much Beth ♥
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Such a moving and beautiful poem. Loved hearing your voice!
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Thank you very much Cindy and hope spring is well under way in the Holler ♥
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Wonderful, Sally xx
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Thanks very much Toni ♥
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Hi Sally, this is a really lovely and meaningful poem.
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Morning Robbie and thank you as always ♥
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Listening I was able to focus on the rhytmn of the poem itself.
a garland Cinquain, beautifully read , beautifully written
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Thanks very much Sue and have a lovely Sunday ♥
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You too, Sally
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This is beautiful, Sally. Your voice is lovely. Thanks for sharing.❤️
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Thanks very much Jill..Have a lovely week ♥♥
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A wonderful poem with so much meaning. Thanks.
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Thanks very much Darlene ♥
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This is lovely, and your reading even more so!
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Thanks very much Dorothy ♥
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Beautiful and profound poem, Sally, and Congratulations on the lovely review too. 💞
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Thanks very much Lauren and have a lovely week ♥
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Beautiful, Sally. You used the meter perfectly, and the message is lovely. I’m glad you enjoyed all the celebrations. Hugs.
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Thanks Diana, some milestone birthdays this year, they come around so fast lol ♥
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I know. This year is flying by too.
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I loved this birthday garland cinquain, Sally. 🎂💖
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Thanks very much Colleen ♥
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Oh yes, how quickly things come around as we age. I still cringe when another year has gone so quick, but I remember my husband’s wise words – “Never shun a birthday, it’s a good reminder you’re on the right side of the green.” Beautiful poem Sal. ❤
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Thanks Debby and as always wise words from the lovely ‘G’ ♥♥
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We have a couple of birthdays coming up in the family in the next few weeks, and I love your poem, Sally. Thanks for sharing it and congratulations on the great review.
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Thanks very much Olga and hope you enjoy some wonderful parties to celebrate.. ♥
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Thank you very much Maureen.. have a lovely week. xx
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I love this, Sally. We should always celebrate our gift of birthdays. Xo
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Thank you Denise and we should even if it is just for the cake lol ♥
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Reblogged this on Judith Barrow and commented:
Wonderful!!!
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Thanks very much Judith and have a lovely week ♥
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You’re very welcome, Sally. Let’s hope we both enjoy good weather. x
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This is wonderful! Each stanza offers something positive about the experience – and I love laughter lines, too! Great review. ♥♥
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Thanks very much Alex and all we can do is accept those laughter lines and the fun we had creating them ♥♥
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Thanks very much for sharing Traci.. hugsx
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Beautiful poem, Sally! I treasure every birthday I get to celebrate.
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
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Thanks so much and me too Yvette especially as I have got older ♥
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Thanks for sharing Michael..hugsx
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It is somehow calming your voice to hear, Sally!Thank you for reading this wonderful poem! Best wishes, Michael
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Glad you enjoyed Michael and thank you hugsx
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Your poem resonated and a timely reminder of the precious years spent with family and friends.
Congratulations on the wonderful review, Sally! xx
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Thanks very much Luciana and delighted you enjoyed. hugsx
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