This week the Carrot Ranch Flash Fiction Challenge by Charli Mills prompts us to write in 99 words, no more, no less… a story about ‘an interlude’ – mine is A Musical Interlude
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A musical interlude
The loss was unbearable. They had been together for forty years after bumping into each other on the dance floor of the youth club. He was gangly and thin as a rake, and she still chubby with puppy fat. They danced all evening and had done so every night since. Her daughter took her hand as the music she had selected began to play. Family and friends around her smiled as the song reminded them of the wonderful love they had witnessed. For just a few more minutes, they were together, dancing, as they would be again one day.
©Sally Cronin 2019
If you would like to participate in this week’s flash fiction, you have until the 23rd to submit your story: https://carrotranch.com/2019/09/20/september-19-flash-fiction-challenge/
I have a number of short story collections and you can find my books and their reviews: https://smorgasbordinvitation.wordpress.com/my-books-and-reviews-2019/
I hope you enjoyed my bit of flash and your feedback is always welcome.. thanks Sally.
A beautiful story of forever love, Sally. It warms my heart.
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Thank you Norah..hugsx
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The little moments are so important… Thanks for bringing it to life, Sally.
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thank you Olga..enjoy your week. hugs ♥
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So poignant . . .
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Thanks Liz x
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That was beautiful, Sally! ❤️
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Thank you Jennie..♥
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You’re welcome, Sally! Hugs.
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Yes, dancing, the movement of it, the expression of life. I love this visual interlude. No surprise off of our Sally 🙂 Well done.
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Thank you Claire…♥
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Lovely and sad, all at the same time. ❤
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Thank you Debbie..♥
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True Sally style. Nailed it! ❤
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Thanks Debby..♥♥
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❤
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beautiful post, Sally. showcasing the power not only of music but of words.
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Thank you Jim..
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A lovely, romantic moment, Sally. Hugs on the wing.
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Thanks Teagan..hugsx
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Lovely and sad, as well.
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Thank you Jacquie…hugsx
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Well done, Sally! 🙂 Thank you, and have a beautiful weekend! Michael
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Thank you Michael and you too.. x
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:-))
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Lovely piece, Sally, and a great reminder of music’s importance in many lives.
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Thank you very much Becky..hugs
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Sweet ans heart touching
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Thank you Annette..hugsxx
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A beautiful piece, Sally
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Thank you Robbie..hugs
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