Over the coming weeks I will be sharing some of the stories from this collection and others and I hope you will enjoy them.
Today a story from Life’s Rich Tapestry, the original was in response to a prompt by Diana Wallace Peach Myths of the Mirror
The 1812 Overture
Pixabay image by Marianne Sopala
‘Monsieur Henri, Oh drat, I am so sorry, I didn’t mean to sneeze so hard and blow you into the tree with your troupe.’
The little elephant pressed her trunk up against the lopsided house with its trembling occupants clinging to its roof.
Monsieur Henri, the patriarch of the world famous mouse circus act known as ‘Les acrobates de la famille mouskateer’ shuddered in the cold wind that whistled through the woods, and wondered how une éléphant even one as petite as this one, could sneeze harder than the current almost hurricane.
He was about to give this pesky and overlarge teenager a piece of his mind, when he saw tears rolling down her wrinkled face, freezing in mid-air before hitting the ground. He felt the rest of his troupe huddling even closer as they tried to get warm, almost pushing him off the roof of their living quarters, and decided that he needed to remedy the situation rapidement.
‘It is alright Tiffany; I know that it was un accident and that you did not intend to blow us into the next county. But I need to get ma famille somewhere warm before they freeze their derrieres off, and you will need to help us’
Tiffany blinked her eyes a couple of times to clear the tear related icicles from her long lashes; nodding her head enthusiastically and swinging her trunk from side to side; nearly knocking Henri off his teetering perch.
‘Tiffany, Tiffany mon cherie, you must calm yourself, and please if you are to sneeze again, point that cannon in another direction.’
The elephant looked pleadingly at the shivering mouse, stretching out her trunk tentatively towards him. Immediately all the mice pressed backwards towards the trunk of the tree, terrified they were going to be blown to kingdom come.
‘It is okay monsieur Henri, please climb onto my trunk with your family, climb up to the top of my head and then tuck yourselves behind one of my ears. I will keep them pinned back, and curled up at the bottom, so that you are safe and warm inside’. I will then pick up your house in my trunk and return us to the circus as quickly as possible.
Henri turned his head and looked at his family and fellow acrobats as they regarded him with suspicion and terror.
‘My petit choux, I have seen your family in the circus ring, and your speciality act of flapping your ears to the music of the great Tchaikovsky’s 1812 Overture.’ Henri looked up at the little elephant and smiled wryly. ‘Are you sure you can keep those ears of yours still for that length of time?’
‘Monsieur Henri,’ the elephant looked fiercely determined. ‘I promise you that I will not sneeze or flap my ears until you and your family are safe.’
Commandingly the mouse turned to his shivering family. ‘We have no choice mes amours; we will surely die in minutes if we remain in this exposed position, courage and viva la France.’
With that Henri leapt onto the bottom of Tiffany’s trunk and began the scramble up the wrinkled snout, passed the large brown eyes, over the smooth round forehead and down into the pocket formed by one of her massive ears. Within seconds he was squashed at the bottom of a mound of white fur and scrabbling paws as his family jumped into the envelope with him; shrieking in terror and excitement.
Henri managed to fight his way to the top of the pile and peeped out over the top of Tiffany’s ear. Sure enough their house was in the grip of her strong little trunk, and she was now lumbering into the wind and snow, trying to retrace her steps in the tracks she had made earlier. He shivered and tucked himself back down again, curling up with his sons and their wives as they stared wide-eyed at him for reassurance.
It seemed like hours before he felt their mammoth transport stop moving. Despite his reluctance to leave the pocket of warmth created by his furry if fragrant family, he poked his head up over the top of the ear, and saw that they were now in the middle of a clearing in the forest where Tiffany had come to a halt. She was carefully moving her head to one side and then the other as she looked for the right path to take.
‘Oh caca,’ whispered the mouse, so as not to alarm his already hysterical family.’
He was just about to inquire if they were lost, when Tiffany jerked into a run, nearly throwing him out from behind her ear.
In the distance he could hear the sound of trumpeting, and as they smashed through the snow covered undergrowth, he could feel Tiffany’s great heart thumping thunderously against his own rib cage. With a last push they broke out of the forest undergrowth, and the little elephant stopped, breathing heavily, and putting down the mouse house. She lifted her trunk and gave a trumpet of her own, resulting in petrified shrieks and much scrabbling around from the ensemble tucked behind her ear.
Henri, who had been tossed unceremoniously on top of his eldest son’s head, dared to raise himself up to look out at the cause of such a cacophony, and saw massive grey shapes emerging from the snow storm. He watched in wonder as the beasts drew closer and surrounded Tiffany, touching her with their trunks and rumbling gently as they gathered her into their protective midst.
He had heard, and partially understood, the comforting language of these huge animals as they conversed at night when the circus was quiet, and he gathered that their little friend was advising her family of the traumatic events. Her mother who led the herd, and was the star of the circus, nodded her noble head from time to time and eyed up her daughter’s ear, still firmly plastered to the side of her head. She then picked up the discarded mouse house in her massive trunk, leading the way back through the clearing to a wide path the herd had created, followed by Tiffany and a parade of her sisters and aunts.
Within minutes there were shouts and cries as the circus folk raced towards them from the shelter of the big top and the surrounding caravans. The ring master arrived and took charge, leading the herd into the warmth of the colourful tent, placing a small net beneath Tiffany’s ear which seemed to have gone into a spasm.
‘Someone put on the ‘1812’,’ the ring master bellowed at the assembled circus family, and one of the clowns dashed off through to the back of the tent.
As the sound crashed out of the speakers, the herd of elephants began flapping their ears in time to the music, and with a sigh Tiffany finally relaxed her ear, releasing a white cascade of mice into the safety net. The acrobatic troupe were handed over to their keepers to be rubbed gently with hot towels and given a reviving brandy.
The ring master, who was particularly fond of Henri, held up the mouse in cupped hands and looked him the eye. ‘Well old friend, it seems that you have survived to perform another day, and it has given me an idea for a new act.’
And dear reader, this is how the world famous and most daring mouse act in circus history came to be.
‘Les acrobates de la famille mouskateer’ thrilled the crowds with their tumbling and acts of daring on the backs of the elephants as they paraded around the ring, flapping their ears to the ‘1812 Overture.’
Many years later an old elephant, matriarch of the herd now enjoying their life in a sanctuary, turned to her great-granddaughter who had been listening to her favourite story for the millionth time.
‘Do you miss the circus grandmamma?’ She looked up at the rheumy eyes of the storyteller.
‘I miss some things Gigi, including friends like dear monsieur Henri.’ Tiffany gently touched the little face in front of her. ‘But, we never knew what it was like to roam freely until we were brought to this sanctuary many years ago, when I was still a young elephant. You are lucky that nearly all animal circuses are now gone, and no more of our kind will be taken from our wild homes. But even that has its dangers from humans, and I am not sure what will become of us in the future.’
Gigi leaned into the side of her grandmamma and felt reassured by the gentle rumblings.
The herd began to move towards the buildings on the edge of the sanctuary, quickening their pace and nudging the little ones ahead of them. This was their favourite time of the day when their head keeper, once a young apprentice at their circus, would crank up the old record player attached to two speakers on poles.
The elephants formed a ring with much excited trumpeting and with the little ones running in and out of their legs; they began to flap their ears as the much loved music filled the air.
©Sally Cronin 2019
I hope you have enjoyed the story and as always would love to hear from you thanks Sally.
About Life’s Rich Tapestry
Life’s Rich Tapestry is a collection of verse, microfiction and short stories that explore many aspects of our human nature and the wonders of the natural world. Reflections on our earliest beginnings and what is yet to come, with characters as diverse as a French speaking elephant and a cyborg warrior.
Finding the right number of syllables for a Haiku, Tanka, Etheree or Cinquain focuses the mind; as does 99 word microfiction, bringing a different level of intensity to storytelling. You will find stories about the past, the present and the future told in 17 syllables to 2,000 words, all celebrating life.
This book is also recognition of the value to a writer, of being part of a generous and inspiring blogging community, where writing challenges encourage us to explore new styles and genres.
One of the reviews for Life’s Rich Tapestry
Life’s Rich Tapestry: Woven in Words by Sally Cronin is a creative combination of syllabic poetry, flash fiction and short stories inspired from the prompts that challenge a writer to explore various genres of writing. Cronin’s poetry gives us insight into the seasons of the year – how we wait for the rebirth of dormant bulbs that herald the arrival of spring and blow “the cobwebs away from the windowsills and our minds.” Her words prance with the April breeze to celebrate the joys of nature, welcome the longer days of summer but also admire the brilliance of “Rust and Gold” – the symbols of autumn. She celebrates the transition with some beautiful poems about festive occasions. She also creates a wondrous fairy world with a string of fairy poems.
Poetry is my favorite part of the book though two flash fiction stories ‘Tramp’s Heartbreak’ and ‘Whitewashing’ captured my heart. The Witch’s Handbook made me smile. Cronin’s love for furry friends shines through ‘You are never too old to be loved’ and The ‘Junkyard Dog.’ After reading the touching story ‘Great Aunt Georgina,’ I had to pause, close my kindle and ponder… some revelations are so heart wrenching yet so beautiful!
I admire Olivia’s forbearance and grit, Jimmy’s kindness and Charlie’s love and loyalty. There are many such memorable characters that will stir your heart. This book touches upon various emotions with finesse. Highly recommended.
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What a gorgeous story, Sally x
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Glad you enjoyed Toni thank you ♥
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A delightful and whimsical story. Viva la elephants!
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Delighted you enjoyed Dave and yes Viva la elephants. Enjoy your week.
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Gorgeous! Thanks, Sally!
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Thanks Olga ♥
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Nice story.
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Thanks Andrew and have a great week..
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You’re welcome, Sally. Same to you.
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Wow, I didn’t remember this story Sal, and I so enjoyed it again. Loved all the French accents, and the story of how the elephants move their ears to music. And loved this metaphor: ‘point that cannon in another direction’. ❤ xx
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lol.. delighted you enjoyed again Debby and it was a lovely prompt from Diana ♥♥
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A brilliant response to “The Elephant Child” Sally!
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Thanks very much Rebecca and have a lovely week..♥
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I also remember this story, and now i know why i always get a smile on my lips when i hear the name Tiffany. Lol Exquisement, Sally! 🙂 hugsx Michael
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Thanks so much Michael.. Music to my ears hugsx
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I remember this one, Sally and loved reading it again. Such a heartfelt and moving story with a wonderful ending!
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Thanks very much Jan.. have a lovely week ♥
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A delightful read, Sally. Circuses and certainly changed since I was a child and I’m happy the big animals are now in sanctuaries.
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Me too Noelle, these amazing creatures deserve kindness and respect.. ♥
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I remember this story, Sally, and it was such a delight to read it again. You are such a master of the short short. And a wonderful review from Balroop. ❤
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Thanks for the inspiration of the challenge Diana, one of my favourite stories to write. ♥
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I love this story, Sally. Thanks for sharing it. I hope you have a super week.
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Thanks very much John..hugsx
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I love this story! Thank you, Sally!
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Thanks Jennie ♥
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Ah, this is such a sweet story Sally! Thanks for posting.
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Thanks very much Dorothy, so pleased you enjoyed.. ♥
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A delightful story, Sally. I remember Diana’s gorgeous poem for this picture too. She double rhymed it.
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Thanks Robbie and I agree about Diana’s poem too.. ♥
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I never tire of reading your lovely stories…
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Thanks very much Jaye and have a lovely week. ♥
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The weather is supposed to improve this week, so I shall be torn between editing and gardening!
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Hopefully some great time in the gardening Jaye and there will be enough rainy days ahead to get your editing done.. ♥
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Only one problem with that plan, Sally. The garden always wins!
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Go with the flow Jaye… it is good for you ♥
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I didn’t need much persuading, Sally. I was out there, pottering away for most of the afternoon! There is something about getting my hands dirty that does it for me!
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Me too Jaye lol… I am editing at the moment and keep looking out of the window to see if the promised sunshine has arrived…. ♥
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We have waited so long for some sunshine, Sally. Now it’s here, it makes doing any work very difficult…
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Just delightful!
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Thanks very much Joy ♥
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Such a fun story with great picturesque language. I love elephants and,it sounds like the storyteller does as well!
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Thanks very much Tricia and delighted you enjoyed. And yes very fond of elephants.xx
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Marvelous, engaging story Sally & wonderful, well deserved review.
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Thanks very much Cindy, so pleased you enjoyed ♥
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Elephants have long been my favourite animals – thank you Sally x
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Thanks Sally delighted you enjoyed.. hugsx
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A delightful story! I enjoyed it.
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Thanks very much Liz..xx
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You’re welcome, Sally.
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The 1812 overture with the cannons and everything is an excellent choice of music with elephants. It was a delightful and fun short story, and it was a great review for your book. Congratulations.
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Thanks very much Thomas and delighted you enjoyed… have a lovely week..
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Have a great week you too
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