In this series you are invited to share an extract of 500 words from your most recent book published within the last 12 months. Details at the end of the post.
The aim of the series
- To showcase your latest book and sell some more copies.
- Gain more reviews for the book.
- Promote a selection of your other books that are available.
Today an extract from a children’s book by Miriam Hurdle – Tina Lost in a Crowd. A book that I can highly recommend.
About the book
Tina invited her friend Erica to attend a popular Tchaikovsky’s Spectacular concert on a summer evening with her parents. During the intermission, her dad left the seat to buy some snacks. Tina and Erica followed him wanting to use the restroom. The shoving crowd pushed them away, and they lost sight of him. It would be impossible to fight through the 18,000 people to find him or go back to Tina’s mom. What would the girls do?
This story tells about what happened to Tina and Erica after they got lost. Children can adapt to the learning from different situations they may observe or encounter. Adults could have discussions with the children about the situations to help them develop problem-solving skills.
An extract from Tina Lost in a Crowd
The musicians took their seats. The conductor came from backstage to the front of the orchestra. The audience clapped their hands to welcome the conductor. When he lifted his baton, the audience kept quiet, and the music started. The first half of the concert went by quickly. Tina recognized the music from the animated movie, Swan Lake.
Then, it was time for a twenty-minute intermission. Mr. Tyler got up to buy some snacks.
“Mom, I need to go to the restroom,” said Tina.
“Me too, Mrs. Tyler,” added Erica.
“Go catch your dad, Tina. He’ll show you the restroom. Hurry and catch him!” Mrs. Tyler helped the girls get past the other people sitting in their row.
“Hurry, Erica! Dad is right there,” said Tina.
Erica held Tina’s hand tight and kept up the pace. They soon caught up with Tina’s dad.
“Dad, Dad….” Tina called as she pulled on her dad’s jacket.
“Uh oh! … Sorry…” As Tina lifted her eyes, the man turned around. It was not her dad.
“Where did your dad go?” Erica asked.
“He was right in front of us. Where did he go?” Tina looked at all the people coming and going from many directions.
“What shall we do? Should we go look for your dad? Should we go back to your mom?” Erica held Tina’s hand even tighter.
“I don’t know where Dad went. I can’t remember where Mom is.” Tina looked anxiously toward the direction where they had come from and tried to spot her mom.
“What are we going to do? How can we get to our seats?” Erica worried.
“Wait, we should not go anywhere. We should stay here. I remember Mom told me a long time ago that if I could not see her, stay where I am, and she would come to find me. She said don’t be afraid. Don’t run around looking for her or Dad. I might go further away from them.”
Tina squeezed Erica’s hand a little and pulled her back against the wall to get out of people’s way.
One of the recent reviews for the book
Miriam writes about a very important topic for a parent to teach their children at a very young age – what to do if they are lost. This young girl and her friend got lost at Hollywood Bowl. I’ve been there with adults, and it’s scary even then to be separated in a crowd of 10-20 thousand people. Cell phones help, but what if the child doesn’t have one? Miriam has a simple rule she shared in the book, so this would be a great book to read with your child and then discuss your own ideas with your children. All in all a great story based on a true event.
Head over to buy the book: Amazon US – And: Amazon UK
Also by Miriam Hurdle for adults
Read the reviews and buy the books:Amazon US – And:Amazon UK – – Goodreads: Miriam Hurdle – Blog: The Showers of Blessings – Twitter: @mhurdle112
About Miriam Hurdle
Miriam Hurdle is a member of the Society of Children’s Book Writers and Illustrators (SCBWI). She published four children’s books at twenty-six years old. Her poetry collection received the Solo “Medalist Winner” for the New Apple Summer eBook Award and achieved bestseller status on Amazon.
Miriam writes poetry, short stories, memoir, and children’s books. She earned a Doctor of Education from the University of La Verne in California. After two years of rehabilitation counseling, fifteen years of public-school teaching and ten years in school district administration, she retired and enjoys life with her husband in southern California, and the visits to her daughter, son-in-law, and granddaughters in Oregon. When not writing, she engages in blogging, gardening, photography, and traveling.
Thank you for dropping in today and I hope you will be leaving with some books.. Sally
What will be in the post and how to get in touch
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- I will top and tail in the usual way with your other books and links, bio, photo and social media.
- I will also select a review from Amazon or Goodreads that I feel has the best selling pitch for the book.
- If your book is very recent and as yet has not received a review then I will share one from a previous book.
- This series is open to all authors both those on the Bookshelf or new to the blog
- I suggest an extract of approximately 500 words or a poem that you feel best reflects the theme of your collection.
- If you have an illustration or images you can attach to the email for me to include. No need to send the cover as I will have that or will access from Amazon.
- If you have not featured on the blog before then I will need Amazon link, Goodreads, blog or website plus your social media links (main three you use)
- Please send your extract and any accompanying images to sally.cronin@moyhill.com
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Congratulations to Miriam on the wonderful spotlight. Tina Lost in a Crowd sounds like a fantastic story for young readers. I’ve read her Songs of Hearstrings, and found it both beautiful and inspirational. Thanks for sharing, Sally!
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Thanks Mae and I can recommend Tina Lost in a Crowd for both children and their parents.. xxx
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Thank you so much for reading Songs of Heartstrings, Mae. I appreciate your support.
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Thanks for hosting Miriam, Sally. I enjoyed Tina Lost in a Crowd!
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Thanks for adding your boost for the book Jill.. a lovely children’s book.. xx
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Thank you for stopping by, Jill. I appreciate your beautiful review of Tina Lost in a Crowd!
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Lovely extract and wonderful review. Congrats to Miriam! Thanks for sharing, Sally. Great spotlight. Hugs 💕🙂
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Thanks very much Harmony ♥
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Thank you very much for stopping by, Harmony. Sally is always generous in supporting the indie authors. ❤ 🙂
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Hi Sally, lovely to see Miriam her with this beautiful book. I enjoyed it very much.
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Thanks for adding your recommendation Robbie.. and I agree a lovely book..hugsx
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Thank you very much, Robbie, for your thoughtful review and for helping with my book launch.
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Reblogged this on NEW BLOG HERE >> https:/BOOKS.ESLARN-NET.DE.
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Thanks for sharing Michael..hugsx
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Always with a great pleasure, and thanks for the reminder to proceed in reading Miriam’s poetry book to an end. Sometimes i really loosing the overview, but with poetry the thoughts will easily come back. hugsx Michael
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Thank you for sharing, Michael.
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With a great pleasure, Miriam! Enjoy your week! xx Michael
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Thank you very much, Michael!
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I also loved Miariam’s “Love of Heartstrings”, and this newest book of her is so wonderful for children to be tought keeping calm in such really stressful situations. I think, Miriam has practically applied a lot of child psychology here,to write a great children’s book. Thanks for the reminder Sally! Best wishes to Miriam!. xx Michael
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Thanks Michael.. and I loved Tina’s adventure and as you say a wonderful lesson for children and their parents.. hugsx
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Agreed, Sally! hugsx Michael
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Thank you so much, Michael. The story is based on the true experience of my daughter. I took her to a concert and she got lost. In fact, how she handled the situation inspired me to write this story. I still remember how scared I was.
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If i remember, you have told about in the past. However one need to have the right words explaining it to children. You definitely have, Miriam! xx
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You’re right, Michael. I think my teaching experience helped me understand the children’s thinking and their language. It comes in handy when I write this children’s book. ❤
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Thank you so much for hosting me and sharing an extract of Tina Lost in a Crowd, Sally. The thought of losing a child in a big crowd still frightens me. Thank you for including Marsh’s review. I appreciated her insightful thoughts. Have a wonderful week!. 🙂
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My pleasure Miriam.. hugsx
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Reblogged this on The Showers of Blessings and commented:
I’m over at Sally Cronin’s Smorgasbord Magazine. She features me today and shares an extract of Tina Lost in a Crowd with an insightful review from Marsha Ingrao. Please hop over to visit her blog. She invites authors to share an extract of a poem of your book.
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Thanks for reblogging Miriam.. delighted to share Tina and her review..hugs
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I appreciate your support, Sally! ❤
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This was such a great story! I’m happy to see it being highlighted here today. Thanks, Sally! 🙂
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Thanks Yvette. a lovely book for children and their parents.. hugsx
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Thank you so much, Yvette! I appreciate your comment and review! 🙂
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As someone who vividly remembers being lost as a child AND losing one of my own for a few minutes, this is a lovely way to encourage parents and children to come up with a strategy to put in place should it happen to them. Love the extract and the great review! xx
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I agree Alex.. the same with agreed passwords for children if approached by a stranger.. simple but effective…♥
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I got lost before GPS and Google Maps, Alex. It was not fun. Getting lost and losing a child briefly happen more often than we realize. I talked about all kinds of situations in the classroom and said, “What would you do? Your parents are not there all the time.” Thank you so much for your comment, Alex. ❤
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Nice to see Tina Lost in a Crowd here. A great excerpt.
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thanks Darlene..hugsx
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Thank you very much for stopping by and commenting, Darlene!
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Really enjoyed this story, and the message it shares, Miriam. The illustrations are outstanding!
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Thanks Jacquie.. a lovely book.. xx
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Thank you so much, Jacquie! I love reading books with messages to my grandkids. Yeah, it took me six months to find my illustrator. She is Ukrainian. I hope she escaped the war! Whenever I look at my book, I think of her.
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Oh, goodness! I hope her and her family are safe 😦
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I know, there’s no way of knowing. I just know that her gig page is not active. 😦
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Sending prayers ❤
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How wonderful to see Miriam and Tina here today! I enjoyed this book immensely and it teaches a great lesson. Thanks, Sally!
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It’s lovely to see you stopping by, Jan. Thank you so much for enjoying Tina and your thoughtful review.
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Thanks for adding your boost Jan for Miriams wonderful book..hugsx
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Fantastic excerpt. Nice to see Miriam and her book featured here today. A great subject premise to not just entertain, but to educate kids. ❤
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Thank you for stopping by and commenting, Debby! I’m glad Tina Lost in a Crowd is a lovely book and has a message for kids. ❤
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A beautiful idea. ❤
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Thank you. ❤
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Thanks Debby ♥
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Such a wonderful feature and wonderful book for young readers. I love seeing Miriam here Sally! 🙌
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It’s lovely to see you here, Cindy! Thank you for your kind comment and support!
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Thank you Cindy.. very happy to share Miriam’s lovely book.
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Sally, it’s so nice to see Miriam’s book featured here! Thanks for sharing my review as well! Hope you are well! Xxx
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I was so excited about my book being featured here, Marsha. I got doubled excited when Sally shared your beautiful review! Thank you so very much!
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It was a blessing to me too! Quite unexpected!
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Thank you so much again, Marsha!
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Thanks Marsha.. and lovely review, delighte to share. We are all good thank you and hope you are too. xx
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Full of gratitude for living and doing well, thanks! 🌹❤️🤗
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A wonderful peek into Miriam’s book. I thoroughly enjoyed the read, and what a great way to teach children about what to do if they get lost. Congrats on the feature, Miriam, and on the excellent review. Thanks for sharing, Sally. 🙂
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Sally also does a wonderful share of our books, Diana! Thank you for adding your recommendation of my children’s book. I appreciate your thoughtful review and all of your support! 🙂
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My pleasure!
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Thanks Diana and I agree about Tina’s adventure… I do feel for parents, especially these days. They need eyes in the back of their heads.. xx
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Not only do I own this book, but it’s autographed by Miriam. I was happy to see her make this come to fruition.
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Wonderful Pete… and look forward to reading more of Miriam’s children’s books as she has a talent for them.. xx
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I only autographed about two dozen books, Pete. Delighted to have sent one to you! You must have a collection of autographed books.
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I’ve read lost in a crowd and recommend. And Miriam’s poetry collection which I’ve read and enjoyed too. Nice to see her today Sally sharing an extract. 🙂
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Thanks for adding your recommendation Marje.. lovely to have Miriam over.. hugsx
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My pleasure Sally. X
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I love this indie author community, Marje. I appreciate your support. Thank you for stopping by and recommending my books. 🙂
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Same here. My pleasure Miriam. ❤
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❤ 🙂
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That’s a great extract, Miriam – and I also love the illustrations. This is such an on-point and important story that would be good for all children to read. Toni x
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Thanks Toni..hugsx
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Thank you, Toni. I wish my Ukrainian illustrator is okay and still alive. Thank you so much for your kind comment! 🙂
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Praying for her, Miriam x
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Yes, for sure, Toni!
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Nice to see, Miriam here today with Tina Lost in a Crowd 🙂
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Thanks Denise..hugsx
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Thank you for stopping by, Denise. I appreciate your review of Tina Lost in a Crowd. 🙂
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Thank you for sharing an excerpt from Miriam’s book, Tina, Lost in a Crowd. This shows a realistic situation and an important learning moment for the girls.
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You’re right, Barbara! I got lost several times. We never know what would happen to the kids but we sure could talk about things when there’s a chance to prepare them as much as we could. Thank you.
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Very much so Barbara and the book is a lovely read for both children and parents.. I enjoyed very much. xx
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