In this series you are invited to share an excerpt of 500 words from any of your published books .
This feature is for any author who has been promoted on Smorgasbord previously.
Please read full details of how to participate at the end of the post.
The aim of the series
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- To showcase your book and sell some more copies.
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- Promote a selection of your other books that are available
The featured author today with an excerpt is Abbie Johnson Taylor and her heartwarming family focused novel, Why Grandma Doesn’t Know Me
About the book
Sixteen-year-old Natalie’s grandmother, suffering from dementia and confined to a wheelchair, lives in a nursing home and rarely recognizes Natalie. But one Halloween night, she tells her a shocking secret that only she and Natalie’s mother know. Natalie is the product of a one-night stand between her mother, who is a college English teacher, and another professor.
After some research, Natalie learns that people with dementia often have vivid memories of past events. Still not wanting to believe what her grandmother has told her, she finds her biological father online. The resemblance between them is undeniable. Not knowing what else to do, she shows his photo and website to her parents.
Natalie realizes she has some growing up to do. Scared and confused, she reaches out to her biological father, and they start corresponding.
Her younger sister, Sarah, senses their parents’ marital difficulties. At Thanksgiving, when she has an opportunity to see Santa Claus, she asks him to bring them together again. Can the jolly old elf grant her request?
Excerpt from Grandma doesn’t know me – Chapter 1 – Natalie
I hated walking with my mom and sister down that long, bright hallway in the nursing home where my grandma lived. The white tile floor and the ceiling covered with fluorescent lights reminded me of school. The only difference was that there were handrails on either side that old people could hold onto while they walked, so they wouldn’t fall.
The blare of television sets from just about every room we passed, laughter and chatter from the nurses’ station, and announcements over the PA system made me wonder why Dad called this place a rest home. The sharp aroma of disinfectant reminded me of the monthly trips I’d made to the dentist years before to have my braces adjusted. I nearly gagged as I remembered the goop they put in my mouth so they could take impressions of my teeth before the braces were put on. The stench of poop and piss from some of the rooms was overpowering.
We finally reached Grandma’s room, and for once, there was silence and only the smell of her perfume. Her bed was next to the window, and she sat in her wheelchair, wearing white pants and a blue, checked blouse. Her curly gray hair was cut short and pushed away from her face. She had a roommate, but the other lady wasn’t there. It was just us.
When we walked into the room, her head was hanging down, but she raised it and gave us a blank look. My mother, as she did every Sunday when we came to visit, went up to her with a smile, kissed her cheek, took her hand, and said, “Hi, Mom.” Then she said, “Oh, I see you’re wearing that lovely blouse I got you for your birthday. It looks nice on you.”
Mom always complimented Grandma on the clothes she wore, most of which she had bought for her. It made me want to throw up.
She sat on the bed next to Grandma’s wheelchair and smiled as she said, “I’ve brought Natalie and Sarah to see you today.”
My younger sister walked up to Grandma without hesitating and took her other hand, as she always did when we visited her. “Hi, Grandma,” she said with a smile.
Grandma’s face broke into a big grin. “Sarah, how lovely you look today. How old are you now?” “I’m ten,” answered Sarah with a grin of her own. “And my sister, Natalie, is here, too.” She turned to me, but I stood where I was. I knew what would happen.
Grandma gave me one of her blank looks. “Who?”
©Abbie JohnsonTaylor
One of the reviews for the book
Abbie Johnson Taylor presents a convincing tale of a family: father, mother and two daughters who find out that the eldest daughter was the fruit of an infidelity over sixteen years earlier. The mother attempted to cover up what happened since the affair was brief, but it surfaced when the dying grandmother told the secret to the oldest daughter.
You learn all this early on. What drives the plot and interest from then on is the wonder how the family would handle this information. You are drawn into the story to the extent that you wonder how you would handle the exposing of such a secret should it happen to you.
The author presents a convincing view of this family by telling the story from the perspectives of each of the family members driven mainly by dialogue. She describes the ten-year old Sarah and sixteen year old Natalie as you would expect ten-year old and sixteen year-old sisters to act. She also focuses on the mother’s, Marti’s, sense of guilt and shame and the father’s, Daryl’s, sense of betrayal.
I would hazard to say that the moral of the story is to avoid getting oneself in situations where one has secrets to hide. But if one does have them and worry that they might be exposed one day, one can learn from the way this family handled the one it had to face.
Head over to buy the book: Amazon US – And: Amazon UK
Other books by Abbie Johnson Taylor
Read the reviews and buy the books: Amazon US: Blog: Abbie’s Corner WordPress Goodreads: Abbie Johnson Taylor
About Abbie Johnson Taylor
I live in Sheridan, Wyoming, where for six years, I cared for my late husband Bill, totally blind, who was partially paralyzed by two strokes soon after we were married. Before that, I was a registered music therapist and worked for fifteen years in a nursing home and other facilities that served senior citizens. I have a visual impairment, and during this time, I facilitated a support group for others like me. I also taught braille and served on the advisory board of a trust fund that allows persons with blindness or low vision to purchase adaptive equipment and services.
I’m the author of a romance novel, two poetry collections, and a memoir and am working on another novel. My poems, short stories, and essays have been published in various journals and anthologies. I belong to several writers’ organizations and a women’s singing group and take water exercise classes at the YMCA
What will be in the post and how to get in touch
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- I will also select a review from Amazon or Goodreads that I feel has the best selling pitch for the book.
- Please share a book that has reviews to select from.
- This series is open to all authors who have previously been featured in the promotions on Smorgasbord.
- I do have a younger readership for the book posts so please consider that when selecting your excerpt.
- I suggest an excerpt of 500 words that you feel would encourage a reader to buy the book, or a poem that you feel best reflects the theme of your collection.
- No need to send the cover as I will have that or will access from Amazon.
- Please send your excerpt to sally.cronin@moyhill.com
- I only ask that authors share the link to their social media and respond to each comment individually as a matter of courtesy.
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Thank you for dropping in today and I hope you will be leaving with some books.. Sally.
Congratulations to Abbie, on what sounds like another fabulous book. I’m off to check it out.
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Great thanks Olga ♥
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Thank you, olgamn. I hope you enjoy the book.
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This sounds like an interesting plot- a grandma with dementia disclosing a well-kept secret that has the power to destroy a family. And you can’t blame her. Gosh, I pity the mother.The review and the excerpt make me want to read the book. Congrats to Abbie.
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Thanks very much Smitha.. and an intriguing plot to be sure. Have a lovely week.. ♥
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Wishing you a lovely week, too, Sally❤️. And I forgot to say, this is a lovely idea to support authors. Thank you for doing this.
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I enjoy it Smitha…♥
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Thank you, Smitha, for your observation. I hope you enjoy the book.
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I consider this a very useful story, also for getting closer information about dementia, without reading specific health related books, which always will put you down. Thanks for sharing, Sally! hugsx Michael
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Thank you, Michael. Although the grandmother with dementia plays a pivotal role, the book isn’t as much about dimentia as it is about how a family deals with a secret that is revealed.
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Thanks Michael..hugsx
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Where would novelists be without the fact that humans love or at least feel compelled to keep secrets. With everyone having their DNA tested these days it has brought great news for some, real life stories and fantastic ideas for writers. Abbie’s story sounds very fascinating.
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Thanks Janet and it certainly opens the door for the past to slip through… xx
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Thank you. I hope you enjoy the book.
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Hi Sally, it’s lovely to see Abbie featured here. I’ve read a few of her books and they’ve been great reads.
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Thanks for adding your endorsement Robbie..much appreciated.. hugsx
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Thank you, Robbi. I hope you enjoy this one as well.
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A wonderful excerpt, and such a surprise. Congrats to Abbie.
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Thanks very much Toni ♥
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Thank you, Toni. I hope you enjoy the book.
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That’s quite a story. I’ve had a number of relatives with Alzheimers but not any surprises like that popping up. Dementia is quite sad. It seems like a very interesting plot.
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I’m glad you like the plot and hope you’ll enjoy the book
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I think more and more of us are experiencing dementia problems in our families Thomas, partly because we are in general living longer. My mother developed it but not until her 90s and it is very sad.. thanks for commenting.
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Thanks for sharing Patty hugsx
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You present such a vivid picture of Natalie, Abbie and the story has a great description of the nursing home where her grandmother is. Sounds like there can be a lot of tension in the story. It’s already present in the excerpt. ❤
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Thanks Carol ♥
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Thank you, Carol.
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The character of Natalie is wonderfully developed in this short extract and I love the premise of the novel. Congratulations to Abbie. x
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Thank you, Alex.
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Thanks very much Alex ♥
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Wait till you meet Snickers. 🙂
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Actually, it’s Squeakers. But that’s an easy mistake to make. No worries. When you read the book, you’ll see why ten-year-old Sarah gave him that name.
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LOL. I must admit, I couldnât remember the name. I had a list of notes from when we were all writing together in the critique group and Snickers was one of the name choices.
Itâs been a bit since I read the book. Now I want to go read it again.
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Great storyline, and I could almost identify as I was a crafty idea being conceived on purpose to rope in my father to marry my mother. Congrats to Abbie. This book is on my TBR! ❤
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Thank you. I hope you enjoy the book.
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I will be sure to review when I get there Abbie. 🙂 x
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That would be great! Thanks again.
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That is sad for your Dad but I know how much he loved you so whatever the intent we are all grateful for it… ♥♥
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And that’s all that matters. Hugs Sal ❤ xxx
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What a great excerpt! Sure pulled me in. Xo
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Thank you, D.L.
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Great thanks Denise.. ♥
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Great excerpt, Abbie. Thanks for hosting Abbie today, Sally. Best wishes to Abbie on her book.
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Thank you, John.
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Thanks very much John.. hugsx
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What a story! I’d like to read it one day. Great cover.
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Thank you, Marina. I hope you will read the book someday.
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Great thanks Marina.. ♥
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What an unusual twist. Clever story!
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Thanks Jacqui… hugsx
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Thank you, Jacqui.
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Oh my gosh – the premise and the excerpt had me hanging on to my seat. So goood!! Abbie, you’re a natural storyteller. And I love your own bio as well. Thanks for sharing this, Sally.
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Thanks very much Pamela.. hugsx
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Thank you. I like an opening that grabs the reader. I hope you enjoy the book.
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I imagine this is not an isolated story but it makes for a good read!
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I doubt it Noelle.. but as you say it makes for a good read.. ♥
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You’re right. Other families have similar secrets. Thank you.
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Hi, I think what makes it unique is the way the family deals with it.
That would be unique for any family.
To me, that’s what makes this book.
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Often, it’s the cover-up that’s worse than the secret. But it also makes a good story.
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I agree Sharon.. ♥
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Thank you, Sharon. I hope you enjoy the book.
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A secret like this would make a good story line in a soap opera.
‘Soaps’ can never keep a secret.
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This is true Sue lol. ♥
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Well, I suppose I could consider a career in writing for soap operas. But it isn’t every day that I come up with a plot like this one. So, that job would be more stressful than I would like. Thank you for your feedback, Sue.
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Indeed it is certainly a very interesting plot and storyline.
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Hi, Abbie. The great thing about writing for a soap is you’re writing with others. When you get stuck in a plot someone else’s imagination takes over.
I think it would be fun for about a month.
I’d much rather write solitary style.
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